Poor, poor Danny. From the way you put us in his head to give us a clear understanding of his character, to the way things have progressed and we're seeing him live out his worst nightmare, kinda makes it hard not to be emotionally invested in the guy. Can't believe his gf just dumped him like that, but he definitely has more important things to worry about. Three chapters in and I'm already on the edge of my seat. This story really is a gem and I can't wait for the next update!
March 21st, 2018 at 03:11am