If I Had You - Comments

Totally sad Ashley passed out on her yet again...poor Sky.
Seems like Brian just can't get enough of Sky tho! Hmm, wonder when they'll realize they've got feelings for one another. Great update! I'm looking forward to the next<3

Ash really should choose when to get drunk and when to give sky attention. As for Brian looking at her there seems to be something pulling them together. Loved the update

Considering they don’t really get hotel nights too often he needs to be more courtesy towards her about how they spend those hotel nights. Getting drunk is fine when they have to be on the bus but not all the time. I can see why she’s be frustrated. Uh oh I wonder why Bri was watching her. Loved it!

Ohhhh snap. It's getting a bit real all of a sudden. Something is going to happen soon, I hope

Definitely drawn to each other and little bit of flirting there too. So will it be Naomi or ash that rocks the boat sending them looking something else?

Ah loved the pool scene!
Brian is super sweet with the comments, he's crushing hardcore lol.
Looks like things are going to get interesting very quickly! Loved the update I can't wait for the next! <3

Lmao sounds like an entertaining pool match to see. Awe he’s adorable when he’s talking to her. And I loved that he’d told her that she didn’t even need makeup. Uh oh I think someone is starting to like her. Loved it!

So happy you updated!

I wonder how the weekend will go now Naomi is there loved the update

I really do love her relationship with Brian. They are hilarious with each other. Hopefully Ash will calm down the more the tour goes on. Oh my that was hot . Loved it!

So loving this story!

Looking forward to more of this story soon xxx

*fans self* that was like super hot! And that picture ?! *dead* haha!
Ooooo I feel lots of drama is headed Skylars way soon as Naomi shows up! Its gonna be a blast haha
Great, hot update! Looking forward to the next!<3

So I wonder how annoying Naomi will be when she’s out visiting?

I am so addicted waiting for something crazy to happen that I get anxious every time you post a chapter

I really enjoyed the update. I like t their interaction and how it feels so seemless

Sad it'll be a while for the next update

I really like seeing how Brian and Sky interact. Loved the update :)

Loved this. Can’t wait to find out Brian thought of Skylar’s makeover. Please update again soon. xxx

@ breepocket

Thank you! Honestly, I make myself laugh sometimes when I'm writing

I love it!!! Can't wait for more doll!