Serendipity - Comments

This story is going to break me, I just know it. But your writing is so beautiful, I'm not going to mind one bit.

The first half of this chapter is somehow very cozy and familiar, it has an easy, falling into step type vibe that I really appreciate and adore. Also the description you put to Jimin's actions and words are lovely.

I THINK THE SECOND HALF OF THE CHAPTER JUST ABOUT KILLED ME ALREADY. My heart is aching for Yura, she is so strong and working so hard to hold herself together for her father and that little bit about her sobs echoing throughout the apartment? That just about did me in. aLSO JIMIN? POPPING IN ON HER? Yessss, let him help, you are strong and lovely, my lady, but everyone needs a shoulder and some help from time to time.

Again, a lovely update and your description and use of emotion is on point.

I absolutely adore what you have started here. Your description and use of feeling is fantastic and creates a sense of loneliness and longing as well as intrigue and suspense as to where the story is going to go from here. I personally loved the ending of this chapter a lot, it leaves you right on the edge and wanting to read more.

I can't wait to see where this goes.