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  • TacosRTheBombDigity

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    this is a great story!! i really hope that u update it! :D :D
    November 28th, 2008 at 09:40pm
  • MiaRaah

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    ohh, this is definitely better
    =]
    November 20th, 2008 at 01:19pm
  • jonasfan0213

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    i like it, it's diffrent and u should deff. give her a power, that would rock.
    November 4th, 2008 at 05:58pm
  • NiallAndThePotatoes

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    That was really good. Just read all 7 parts. Very original.
    Write more soon.

    I <3333 Kevin Jonas [Till Death Do Us Part...And Eternity]
    -Alyssa-
    July 17th, 2008 at 10:30pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Awww1 kevin is so cute!
    <3!
    July 6th, 2008 at 03:36am
  • vanilla twilight;;

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    Haha, awesome updates! =D
    Loving it!
    July 1st, 2008 at 01:59am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    LOVIN IT!
    <3!
    June 27th, 2008 at 03:00am
  • Carver Edlund

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    Great story, great idea too.
    Your writing is fun and easy to get into.
    It's nice to read something that focuses on getting to the point rather than wasting chapters and chapters on descriptions, where every second word is about ten letters long and leaves you going "Whaaa?"
    Well done on an awesome story
    -Dev
    June 19th, 2008 at 09:12pm
  • xo amore

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    love it! omg i love the song out of this world and i love this story!

    update soon! =D
    June 17th, 2008 at 04:47pm
  • low like you

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    She was on her way to Mars, and she ran into a star...
    June 17th, 2008 at 01:43am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    well she kinda is. Shes from another Galaxy and all but she looks human so.....yeah. I dont know maybe ill give her some sort of power.
    June 12th, 2008 at 11:21pm
  • vanilla twilight;;

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    i agree with Hold On Tight =]
    one question: is she an alien???
    June 12th, 2008 at 10:58pm
  • low like you

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    Short beginning. But I'm feeling this will get good. More when you can.
    June 12th, 2008 at 06:34pm
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