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  • kiss my sas

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    ok, binge done.
    Dude, I am in love with your writing. I have told you before, I will tell you again. It. Is. So. Freaking. AMAZING!
    I love Eva's character. An amazing mix of clearly intelligent, klutzy, and in puppy love :P I can't blame her inner monologue going to the gutter. I would love a TA like that!
    Very excited to see what you have in store :)
    August 28th, 2018 at 03:39am
  • kiss my sas

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    OMG! How did I not know you were writing again???
    About to get all up in the story and spam you with comments at the end ;D
    August 28th, 2018 at 02:40am
  • WTFIRilke_

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    I know, the 'man- bun' looks good on him :)
    July 16th, 2018 at 05:51pm
  • line112

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    @ WTFIRilke_
    Thanks :D heheh it is quite funny imagining him as a lab coat wearing type :p okay this is going to sound weird, but i saw that clip where they play When Love and Death Embrace at provinsiirock 1999 and he had his hair tied up there... then the whole plot just kind of came to me... XD
    July 16th, 2018 at 05:02pm
  • WTFIRilke_

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    Hahahaha,god, you're a humour genius! Although I have to admit that I find it hard to imagine Ville in a chem lab,or any lab for that matter. But hey,the story's great, and you paint a really good picture :D
    July 16th, 2018 at 11:25am
  • Codikins5

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    <3
    July 13th, 2018 at 02:12pm
  • WTFIRilke_

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    This part was amazing,I couldn't stop laughing! I absolutely love the way you write,you know why ;) It's hard to get sarcasm through in writing,and yet you do it so well! Cheers, my pretty, hope you update soon !
    July 12th, 2018 at 04:27pm
  • rockerxgurlx616

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    I'm loving this story, I can't wait to see where it goes.
    July 12th, 2018 at 10:47am
  • andysgirl

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    Update!!!
    July 10th, 2018 at 03:40pm
  • WTFIRilke_

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    And your updates always make me smile,so I guess we're even :P
    July 9th, 2018 at 05:00pm
  • line112

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    @ WTFIRilke_

    you called me pretty Embarassed, making me blush here :P
    July 9th, 2018 at 03:19pm
  • WTFIRilke_

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    Aaaah,so happy to read you! Nice job, as always, my pretty ;) ! Can't wait for the next one!!
    July 9th, 2018 at 10:42am