End of the Line - Comments

Oh boy that last line. I need to know the rest! The suspense is killing me! And there's Pokemon? Is this Pokeverse or does the character just own Pokemon merch? Also, shoutout to Philly!

Who! I wasn’t expecting things to go that quickly
It felt like someone going through their last moment, dying being run over is a terrible and frightening feeling.

Woah! I'd for sure read more of this, you clearly write about things you understand, which is so important. Keep it up.

You're descriptions are really strong straight off the bat and I like how well you create the surroundings. I lived in London for a few years and god the underground was a sweaty nightmare and I used to always try and find the fans to keep myself cool :')

I really look forward to seeing how the story develops!! I have no clue what way the story is going to go down yet but I'm excited to see what unfolds!

OH jeez :O I already know she ain't gonna survive but still, this is intense :O