There's something eerie about the way you are writing the chapters. It starts off as us feeling intrigued but ends with us feeling completely vulnerabe (as if we are the ones who should be fearing the unknown). It's amazing how you're writing these chapters because within the short yet simple chapters, we are getting bits and pieces that eventually align. I cannot wait to see how the rest of the plot unfolds. The sentence in the summary was a great touch as it allows us to think about the possible directions of the story. Also, I'm enjoying your layout–it's simply beautiful!
November 11th, 2018 at 08:46am
