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  • DestedDreams

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    I love Gordon! Looking forward to see how this goes.
    May 16th, 2020 at 10:19am
  • AngelicWasteland;

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    I like that you've started out straight to the point, but I'm really hoping to learn more about what the hotel looks like and the feel it has... just to better form a picture in my head. Hotel Hell gives me an idea though.

    I've never read a Gordon Ramsay fanfiction before, so I'm excited to see what comes next and how they turn things around.
    May 16th, 2020 at 01:11am
  • amandarenee08

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    I really like this update. I can't wait to see more and where you guys take it Arms
    May 16th, 2020 at 12:44am
  • PoeticMess.

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    A GORDON RAMSAY FANFICTION. I never thought I'd see the day but I am living for it!! I'm so excited!

    I do maybe recommend making the text background white. It's a little hard to read maroon text translucent over a patterned background.

    Looking forward to this!
    April 29th, 2020 at 07:40am
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