You're a Demon, You're an Angel - Comments

  • AllTimePensFan

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    I really liked this chapter! I like how her first thought was to go to Theo and he, no questions asked, accepted her and declared they were going to help Nina (I think that’s her name, and I’m totally blanking on it) I’m getting a protective yet over bearing, kinda dangerous vibe from Thames, I can’t decide if I trust him or not. I can’t wait for more!
    December 31st, 2018 at 06:46am
  • EmptySighsAndWine

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    @ AllTimePensFan
    Thank you very much. I really appreciate it. I like put Sabrina's position in this way with the other girls, since she's the bosses favorite, she has to deal with a lot of crap with him and the only reason she does it is to protect the other girls in the best way she can. As for Theo, he shall be in the next chapter and I've got some big plans for his character. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'll start working on the next chapter sometime this week since I have a few days off of work.
    December 10th, 2018 at 02:27am
  • AllTimePensFan

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    I am really enjoying this story! I really hate her boss and I’m ready for Theo to swoop in and kick his ass. I could really see Sabrina taking over and making it a better place for the girls! I can’t wait for more! Keep it up
    December 10th, 2018 at 02:20am
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    @ RFarley1991
    I definitely plan on it. I'm writing the third chapter now as I type this.
    November 26th, 2018 at 03:27pm
  • RFarley1991

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    I hope you plan on continuing this story.... it's intriguing
    November 22nd, 2018 at 11:54am