I'm here judging entries for my Mistletoe and Wine contest!
Layout / Summary
Okay so the layout is stunning, whaaaaaaat? I hate how you do that omg. And I adore the first two sentences of the summary, they paint such a beautiful picture. I can't wait to read more!
Content
I think I've probably said this before, but your description is just breathtaking. I can almost imagine myself in Hayne, drinking the lattes and letting the snowflakes melt into my skin. And the comets on Christmas Eve? Amazing. I want to see something like that in my lifetime, I can imagine it really is truly breathtaking.
I think my favourite part about this is the repetition, though. It always brings the reader back to this one point, this point that Hayne is stunning, and really encapsulates what Christmas is. It's so different, not having a de-facto character and having them do something. It's just this beautiful description of a place captured almost in a photograph and then described, and it's so soothing to read. And the repetition just ties everything together in a perfect bow.
Concrit
Nope, I got nothing. Zip, nada.
Overall
I adore this piece. It's written beautifully and it's just so perfect and wonderful and makes me feel so warm and fuzzy. I love it.
Layout / Summary
Okay so the layout is stunning, whaaaaaaat? I hate how you do that omg. And I adore the first two sentences of the summary, they paint such a beautiful picture. I can't wait to read more!
Content
I think I've probably said this before, but your description is just breathtaking. I can almost imagine myself in Hayne, drinking the lattes and letting the snowflakes melt into my skin. And the comets on Christmas Eve? Amazing. I want to see something like that in my lifetime, I can imagine it really is truly breathtaking.
I think my favourite part about this is the repetition, though. It always brings the reader back to this one point, this point that Hayne is stunning, and really encapsulates what Christmas is. It's so different, not having a de-facto character and having them do something. It's just this beautiful description of a place captured almost in a photograph and then described, and it's so soothing to read. And the repetition just ties everything together in a perfect bow.
Concrit
Nope, I got nothing. Zip, nada.
Overall
I adore this piece. It's written beautifully and it's just so perfect and wonderful and makes me feel so warm and fuzzy. I love it.