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  • dombelova

    dombelova (125)

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    Ghoul of 2016
    Gender:
    ♂
    Age:
    26
    Location:
    United States
    My apologies for taking so long, I've been dealing with things but here i am!!

    I'm really excited for the next chapter, and what's to come for her? I really liked it, it was short, but set the mood for the story.

    She filed for divorce when she found out he had been sleeping with her sister.

    I really wish that there was more about her feelings on this situation (which, I felt really bad that she found that out).

    Other than that, I really enjoyed this, and I'm excited for the chapter!!

    (Also don't put your writing down! ❤)
    May 20th, 2019 at 09:00pm
  • wish on a firefly

    wish on a firefly (885)

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    NaNoWriMo 2017
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    "This isn't great," GIRRRL, you're wrong! This is great! And I can't wait to read more. Just remember not to rush your updates. Take your time with them. Arms
    February 27th, 2019 at 12:44am
  • amandarenee08

    amandarenee08 (100)

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    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    Loved it.
    February 27th, 2019 at 12:42am
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