I really like this, the way it's written takes you on a journey through their friendship and lets you see the bond they have grow as they get older. I'm excited to see what else is to come for them!
@ qblinux This is honestly probably the best feedback I've ever gotten. Thank you! I'm taking bits and pieces of my childhood and throwing them into the story.
I really like your writing style, simple, clean and genuine, those words are touching me, I don't know why, I feel like Luna and Sally were my childhood friends. You are doing really good job here. Happy writing.