The Undoing - Comments

Loved it!

Finally! I’m sure she felt it was worth the wait . I can’t wait to see what else happens now that they’ve taken this step! Loved it!

ITS ABOUT DAMN TIME!

I cant wait to hear the girl talk that's gonna come after this.

Ooooooohhhhh mmmmyyyyy gggggoooooddddd they finally did it!!!!!!!
YESSSSSSS!!!
Hehehe that was hot!

The girls are gonna give her hell about it now bahahahaha
Great update I so can't wait for the next<333

Glad to see the meeting of everyone and Tim went well!
Ooooooo some flirting action from Ben *drools* tehehehehe sneaky mr XD I can't wait to see how the rest of the night goes!
Great update<333

I loved this! The cocker spaniel being Ben. So cute! Glad everyone is getting to meet him and it looked like things went well. I so can't wait for more!

Hahahahhahahahahaha, the cocker spaniel is Ben... HAHAHAHAH this is wonderful!!!
I mean, the night definitely could have gone worse, but I guess i will have to keep guessing how the rest of it goes... CLIFFHANGER?!
Rude! :P
Ben was getting very flirty via song for my liking... I love how Tim wasn't overly bothered, but definitely reminded Fi who she was here with... swoon!!!!

Yay! Everyone is getting to meet him and it looks like things went well. And he knew how to handle everyone. Uh oh Ben is being flirty. Rawr that kiss! Loved it!

YESSSSSSSSSS the kissssss.
Aww the picture is so smokey ;)

@ kiss my sas

@ Vixyn of Shadows

@ high end of low

@ deathbatXcookie

It definitely counts as the third date

Definitely a date!!!
Ahhhhhh they finally kissed yayayaya!!!
I love it when he talks to her in his native language soo sexy and amazing..

Great update! Looking forward to the next! <333

I'm sure the gang would consider that the third date! Especially since it ended with a kiss! I cant wait to see where this will go!

I would have considered that a date lol. But I’m loving what’s brewing between the two! I can’t wait to read more! Loved it

Loved it

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
Normally I am not into that... but I think it was all about the context and the atmosphere you created... It just worked!

@ kiss my sas

I'm so glad you like "little one," too. I wondered if it was kinda weird, considering, but it works for me!

AB IN THE HOUSE! Hells yes!!
Well.... mentioned :P
I love his slight cockiness there - 'They can not finish without me' - Sah good!
Oh Fi, I think you like more than just the tone of his voice... hehehehe
Why is him calling her 'little one' so... umph?! Like, damn... Maybe it is the whole atmosphere right now... drowning in sexy!
FINALLY!!!!! He actually gave in to the CLEAR tension that was there!!!
Naw, that was over farrrrr too quickly!! How is poor Fi going to survive...
OH! And does that count as date three? Does this mean it is time for the friends to barge in?!

Also, that pic... that MIW guy (no idea which one, they aren't my cuppa) looks EXACTLY like a guy I used to know... I mean he obviously copied his look, but holy shit, it is insane! Sorry, complete side note, but it was so weird!

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
Haha, we all know there is no perfection, not even for him!

@ ProverbofHell

I love Tim and Fiona so far, and I don't want to write the bad parts. Lol. I just want Tim to stay perfect.

Loving it! I don't even wan't to get any deeper...as I am certain the manipulation has already started!