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  • kiss my sas

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    Hahahahahaha, I love Andy!!!! Poor sausage doesnt realise how behind he is on the gossip!! Hahahaha, so cute!!!
    Digging the group trying to suss out Tim by his music! And yet another realisitic connection!! Damn girl, forever impressed!!!
    And Juliya! Lower your voice!! Fi doesnt need the boys knowing that shit!! Shhhhhh!! She will never live it down :P
    Sorry to hear about the writers block :( You always know I am here to lend an ear if you need it!!!
    June 3rd, 2019 at 12:38am
  • Vixyn of Shadows

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    They’ve got to lay off her nuts about meeting him lmao. Like Jesus she’s still getting to know him but I know they’re all just curious. Looooved it and that sucks about hitting a block Sad
    June 2nd, 2019 at 05:56am
  • deathbatXcookie

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    Teehee Jules and her big mouth XD at least the boys didnt hear her!
    I love how they're all surprised to finally learn Fiona's been on two dates with Tim so far; picturing their reactions was hilarious..
    The songs you used are amazing, and he really does have a sexy voice omg!!!

    I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how everyone does when they do get to finally meet Tim officially! I have a feeling at least the boys will be a bit overprotective, but accepting at the same time lol.

    Loved the update, I'm looking forward to the next!!<333
    June 2nd, 2019 at 05:29am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    @ Codikins5

    Awe, that's sweet though!!!! And maybe I'll tell Tim the same thing in July. Lol. If I can even speak... tehe
    June 2nd, 2019 at 04:13am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    @ legal assassin.

    I'm the same way about MIW. They do have some good songs. My best friend's daughter has made us listen to "Voices" and "Necessary Evil" over and over. Lol. And I like "Final Dictvm," but to be fair, Tim lends his vocals to that one.
    June 2nd, 2019 at 04:12am
  • Codikins5

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    Oh my ovaries..... Chris is so beautiful. When they signed one of my CDs at Welcome To Rockville, I told Ghost he was beautiful (this was a few years ago.) I wanted the Earth to open and swallow me whole. Anyway, good update!
    June 2nd, 2019 at 03:57am
  • Charnas;

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    Loved the update. I wish I could like Motionless in White, they're awesome in concert and we share a hometown area but they aren't my cup of tea. I do like Immaculate Misconception though. And I only saw them in concert because they were at Welcome to Rockville. My mom hated them lol

    ANYWHO I cant wait to see how the group is when Tim is finally introduced to them. I know the girls will be a little more welcoming than the boys. But it's still going to be interesting
    June 2nd, 2019 at 03:57am
  • amandarenee08

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    Loved the update
    June 2nd, 2019 at 03:35am
  • Vixyn of Shadows

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    I’m in love with this story! And I love the banter between the group and Fi when they’re together. Ooooo non traditional dates sounds fun! Being this sweet and not making a move is nerve wrecking lol. Can’t wait for more!
    May 31st, 2019 at 06:12am
  • deathbatXcookie

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    Second date was just as awesome as the first! I love the out of the ordinary date plans...definitely makes for a better and more fun time!!!
    Wonder what he'll pick the next time lol.

    Post those pictures all you want ;) I definitely don't mind seeing them more than once!!!
    Great update, totally looking forward to the next <3
    May 28th, 2019 at 04:46pm
  • kiss my sas

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    Okay, Tim speaking in Swedish gets me EVERY TIME!!! Urgh, that face and those words... swoon!
    I love his little remark about 'knowing a guy who can get her the record for free'. Freaking adorable! Love!
    Hells yes the cliff diving was a good idea ;) I love how you wrote the adrenaline, and Tim being all smooth and convincing!
    GOD DAMN IT, TIM! You keep missing her lips! I am getting as frustrated as Fiona!! Urghhh!!!
    THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!!!! It definitely made my day after my ultra shitty weekend!! You are the best Mibba spouse EVER!!!
    And also, definitely complaining about 80's Tim in suspenders and a deliciously open button :D :D :D
    May 28th, 2019 at 04:58am
  • Charnas;

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    They're so cute together. I love them going on non traditional dates. And dude that picture is yummy.
    May 28th, 2019 at 03:40am
  • amandarenee08

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    Fiona and Tim were just so cute in this. I absoutley loved this update. It was so cute and amazing. I seriously can't wait for the next chapter.
    May 28th, 2019 at 03:12am
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    @ Codikins5

    First, thank you for reading! And second... Right?! I could look at that picture all day tehe
    May 28th, 2019 at 03:05am
  • Codikins5

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    I'm reading both and definitely don't mind seeing it again ;)
    May 28th, 2019 at 03:02am
  • kiss my sas

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    I dont think I can function for the rest of the day... Holy fucking shit...
    May 27th, 2019 at 04:00am
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    @ kiss my sas

    TIM IN GLASSES!?!?! AM I RIGHT? Happy face
    May 27th, 2019 at 03:30am
  • kiss my sas

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    Um, EXCUSE ME??!!! THAT PICTURE?! ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME WITH THOSE UPDATES?!???
    I am dead. You have killed me with his pure sexiness. I am a puddle of melted goo. uurrrghhhhhh....

    Ok, pulling myself together... LOVE the first date. Sets their 'actual' relationship off to a less-than-typical path! I love it.
    And I love the girl time!!! I love that even though Fi tried to be subtle, she just can't help giving herself away with a grin.
    Oh hells yeah, this is gunna get serious!!!

    Anyways, back to staring at the pictures....
    May 27th, 2019 at 03:22am
  • deathbatXcookie

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    Ahh what a cool first date!!! And im sure he can do AMAZING things with his hands ;) I'm excited to see what Fiona picks for date number 2!

    The pictures OMGGGGGG!
    Great updates for both stories I cant wait for the next!!! I got distracted with the long haired pic on Spade's update and forgot to say that sorry lol <333
    May 25th, 2019 at 04:37pm
  • Charnas;

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    Going to a shooting range for a first date is badass! Not gonna lie. I wonder what the next date's activity is gonna be!
    May 25th, 2019 at 12:53am