The Undoing - Comments

Spot on with the dating descriptions!
I just love how its building up slowly to them becoming physical..the kiss to the cheek and the good night in that accent *fans self* .
I love how everyone's looking out for her but going that far but damn like they're so innocent lmao!
Amazing updates!!!<3 Looking forward to the next!
And you know im always down to look at more pics of Tim ;)

@ kiss my sas

Glad you appreciated my description of dating. It's SO infuriating!!!! You either interview or jump straight into bed, there's no in-between anymore.
Haha! Patience, woman! Tim will get there ;)

HAHAHAHHAHHA Ash's ringtone.... Golden!!!!
But that tension is spilling over from Spade.... KISS HER, TIM!!!!
Um, that explanation of dating is PERFECT!!! IT totally is a verbal job interview! Holy shit... my mind just exploded a little... dont mind me, just wiping it all up...
Ohhhhh, the uncertainty about Tim is starting within the boys!!!
Cannot wait til they meet Tim!!

Yep she's in trouble.

@ kiss my sas

I listen to a lot of dark stuff

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
I have no doubt!!! I knew that you would have a bank of relevant songs :P

@ kiss my sas

Not gonna lie, I was thinking about that song for the new one too. But I have a few others that might save me from overusing "Big Bad Wolf." Lol.

Dude, this line fucking got me good!!!
"Just in case, though...wear cute undies. Something that matches."
Fucking perfection!!!! I LOVE IT
Ohhhhh and in comes the protective side of Ash when he realised the age difference!!! Uh oh!
Melts into a puddle of goo at älskling... urggghhhhh
HAHAHAHHAHAH, Ash knows best! It suddenly occurred to Fiona that Ashley might have been right; Tim could very well be introduced to her undergarments later.
And that song choice!!!! Sure you should put this in the new story, too ;) VERY fitting :D

Hahahaha, god love a girl's night turning into gossiping about Fiona's new crush!!! I freaking love it :D
And how cute is the friendship between Ash and Fi?! Urgh, adorable!! Their playful bantering, Ash going to her for ring advice/help? So cute!
Gah, I love this :D

Bahahahaha gossip sure does get around quick with that bunch doesn't it?! XD
Poor Fi getting the third degree so soon but I love how the girls just want to be sure she's ok and all.
OOOOOH another wedding in the near future yay!!!
Ash is right, sex does change a mood awful fast lmao! Ring shopping and getting ready for her 'date' should be a super fun time!

Loved the update and cant wait to see how you bring the other two bands into the mix! <3<3<3

Love the update! I love Ashley and Fiona's friendship. And omg the womanizer is getting married that's shocking! But it's adorable he went to Fiona for help when it comes to the ring.

Yes more interaction with Tim!
Imagining the scenery you described was amazing, and picturing Tim sorting there so cool and calm wow! The swedish lines *squeals*, him pointing out the American girl part doesn't surprise me I giggled at the line lol!
I so hope she takes up his offer to go to the show!

I'm already so in love with this, and very much looking forward to the next update <3<3

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
It is PERFECT!!
It is just so... intimate! I love it :D

@ kiss my sas

I wasn't sure about using "älskling," since I abused it in Spade, but it makes me swoon too. It's such a good pet name.

God, you painted a gorgeous scene at the beginning!! I thought I liked my wedding venue, but that sounds fucking STUNNING!!!
FUCK YES! You bought älskling into this universe!!! There is something about imagining Tim say that in his adorable accent that makes me all swoony!!
Hahhahahaha, and then the line about her being an American girl! LOL! It works on Aussies, too, clearly :P
But got damn, the immediate connection between them *fans self*
Please, please make her somehow go to the show next weekend :D What an open invitation from the man of the hour!
And another shout out?! You are spoiling me!!! Thank you, my lovely spouse!!! I am sooooo honoured that you are letting me help :D

So first up, the interaction with Fiona and Ashley is god damn hilarious!!!! I love the friendship dynamic already :D
I would like an October to come be my hair stylist, please! I feel like a constant pony is getting a bit old :P
Ohhhhh, Tim being all mysterious and vanishing... I love him already! The hand kiss - swoon!!
And Tiffany and her quick wit, I enjoy her, too! this line is amazing - "He's a lot prettier in person,"
Great start!!! count me as hooked!!!

Oooooo!
Off to an amazing start!
Leave it to Tim to be mysterious as usual. Lol. I'm looking forward to the next update <3

This was amazing first chapter. I can't wait to see how you unfold the story!!!!!

Love it! Can't wait to see how this story goes!

SAH KEEN!!!!!!