Insatiable - Comments

Oh Nero, what are you doing? Now the smirk makes a bit more sense, he definitely had a plan! Sneaky fucker! PLaying real dirty now!
Lucky we had Tim to come and save the day *Swoon!*

Hmmm, to be a fly on the wall for that conversation between Tim and Nero!!! Oh, I imagine Tim would have definitely let him know that it was less than acceptable!

Naw, Hels! Just call Brian! Take the bandaid off! You can't let that relationship go to waste!

Naw!!!! Them just cuddling makes me super happy!!!! I want them just to be happy! Gah!

Ohhhhhh!!! Was Nero playing dirty by sending her visions? Not nice, but seems like Tim has caught on to that one rather quickly!
Tension has always been there with her and Nero, but now the level seems real unhealthy, so it will be very interesting in deed on how this one will play out!
Loved the update!

Catch up time here, too!!!

Helena spent the majority of the almost nine hour drive thinking about the benefits of an actual bed when having sex as opposed to the limitations of a bunk. She fully intended to crash with Tim. There was no reason not to; everyone else knew they had slept together and planned to keep doing so.
Just this whole paragraph. Perfect! :P
I am glad they told everyone, but it would have been interesting to see their reactions!!! :P

Ohhh, why is Nero smirking at Helena? What do you know?!

FINALLY! I am so glad she doesn't care if its a bad idea any more!!! So glad that she can actually live life and experience things, possible repercussions be damned!

Oh man, I hope Hels can get her relationship with Brian back. They both deserve to clear the air, and they owe it to each other and the years they have spent as besties to work through enough to get there.

Hahahahah, that Backstreet Boys song, I knew it would come into play somewhere :P

Oh man, they got the chemistry for sure!!! Gah, they are just electric together!!

I hope Danny is okay :(. His reassurance wasn't very reassuring. Oh sweet Jesus. They're gonna kill me with all the sex lol. I wonder why the sharp brief pain was. Loved it!

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
Different People have different opinions. Only one that matters is yours so don’t let anyone change second hand!

@ ProverbofHell

I can't help it!!!! He's SO sexy Though some guy who was in a band that toured with Psyclon Nine over the last month or so said that Tim is a dick. I don't know that it matters...Tim was nice to me when I met him.

How did I not get a notification as soon as this was up?! Unacceptable!
Looks like someone’s got a love-bite alright...poor Danny.

Haha...I am sure Tim doing anything like that to you would get you off my dear

Freaking amazing update. I loved it. I can't wait to see more.

Finally! I'm so excited they finally got together lol. I love the gift they gave her and what it meant to get and them. I do hope despite the doucheness that her and Brian start talking again. Loved all the updates!

Well, I think I fell behind. Damn work!

Chapter 35

Even if Nero sought out a plaything and stayed away from the bus, what were the odds of Evie, Poppy, Kendall, Danny, and Rob not gathering there to drink and watch movies? - Ah, the perils of close quarter living. No private time for sexy time

"Do not start without me," he said, his tone making it clear this was an order, not a request. - Ahh, magic man... you could order me around any day!

He'd texted upon landing safely at LAX, but she hadn't replied. She didn't know what to say, she just knew she couldn't pretend nothing had happened. - Ouch... the silent treatment. That will not help matters, I'm sure. But I doubt he'd hold a grudge.

All thoughts of Brian and Till faded to nothing as Tim pushed her curtain aside. - As well they should!

I'm glad they're deciding not to hide it. She's right, it would be exhausting and honestly, they're all adults. And if these two adults should choose to bang on a regular basis, that's their business and no one elses

Hahaha, maybe they already figured out what was going on and left them alone on purpose... but that doesn't seem like Nero's style. He does like to aggravate me. I feel like he wouldn't just leave them to it

Chapter 36

Again, I'm glad they're not hiding their entanglement, so much easier.

Nero, keep smirking buddy, she's not headed to your room, is she?

Tim chuckled. "Water conservation? That's my lure?" - It's important, Tim! The naked girl is merely just a bonus.

The Till situation had been out of character for her, but it had also been safe in a way: there was nothing that would bring them back together in the future. - I really want to believe this... but I fear that your love for him will drag him back eventually... hahaha

I wholeheartedly believe she's right when it comes to Tim never talking shit behind her back about their naked encounters. At this point he's given her no reason to think he'd be anything but professional and gentlemanly in regards to her career. I hope it stays that way.

"Judge me if you must," she said, relaxing against him and starting to move to the music, "but this song inspires me." - I can't really say I blame him for judging... but I feel she may be about to bring him around the best way she can

Phew! These two are just perfect together right now! I know something may cause an upset cough*Nero*cough, but until then I am thoroughly enjoying them as a couple. Or fuck buddies. Whatever they are!

Sorry for the late comments! But I must admit I didn't hate having back to back updates to read

Mhhhhh mhhhh....they’re going at it like bunnies now
Not complaining! On a business trip for the next 4 days so will gladly lap up anything more steamy with Hels & Tim when I come back to my Travel Lodge after a long day!!!

Lovvvvvvvvvved it!

Oh please, please dont talk yourselves out of it!!! You have time, and I am anxious!!!!

FUCK YES! Tim for the win! Brilliant idea!!! I am totally unanxious now (yup, I just wrote a fake word in my excitement)

"Do not start without me," he said, his tone making it clear this was an order, not a request.
Um, okay, I did not expect that string of words to be so hot. WHAT?! God damn Tim, you're making me into a furnace!

OH no, get off your phone, young lady!!! Stay away from homesick, or guilt over Brian, or whatever! I dont care, no excuses!!
(If you really want Brian to be happy, I know a character you can set him up with ;) Hehhe)

thoughts of Brian and Till faded to nothing as Tim pushed her curtain aside.
Oh thank God! The magic of Tim manages to make Brian and Till forgettable. That is a strong talent...

FINALLY!!!!!
I AM SO PROUD OF THEM FOR FINALLY FUCKING!!! (again, another weird sentence... oh well!)

ANd now a night completely theirs?! Oh man, things are getting gooooddddd!!!!!!! :D
So keen for the next instalment! I want to see how this goes! Them telling everyone is going to be insane!!!

Smexy time! Loved the update! I can't wait to see another

*sigh*
your update emails somehow ALWAYS go to my Junk folder, so I had just sat down with a glass of wine and checked my "Subscriptions" to see this was updated!

So carnal & satisfying! Thank you!

"But this is your real gift, straight from the minds of Evie and Poppy, and put together by all of us." - uh-oh, sounds dangerous... hahaha

Naww! That's such a sweet gift. The girls did well! Perfect memento for her first tour with some pretty awesome people.

The smile faded when she spotted her sleeping form snuggled against Tim's side. - Adorable!

Just when I thought it couldn't get any better... the pictures he gave her are so sweet. Gah! She needs to just jumo him already! It's killing me!

One corner of his mouth curled up and he turned to face her fully. He stepped into the doorway, resting his shoulder against the frame. "Yes, älskling?" - oh my god...

OH MY GOD! FINALLY! Go girl, do it!!!

"Get ready for the show," Tim said, nuzzling her neck. "I will have you later, söt en. I promise." - Okay, I get it... but my god. Just those words alone would make it difficult to walk away from him right now. I so do not blame her for her being reluctant and even whiny that she has to wait!!

"I can assure you, you will not be suffering alone," Tim replied. "I can also assure you that it will be worth it." - Argh!!! I swear, if they decide to be logical and over think this in the time between now and when the show is over... I swear, I will smack their heads together. They have waited long enough! Time to get down and dirty!

@ ProverbofHell

Yeah... And the worst part is, even though you know the epic fail is happening, you can't stop it. Lol. The first time I met Mark, I just babbled. I was so nervous, and we were totally alone, and I dunno. He was very patient and talked to me for about 20 minutes.

How many languages do you speak?

Ah, okay. That is the kind of thing best done when you're younger and single and don't need sleep. Haha! I know these days I have to have at least 5 hours of sleep a night or I'm a mess. Awwweeee! I would love personalized videos! I got a phone call once, but it was just from a local band guy when he was playing up in Pennsylvania. I still made the squeaky noise, though, because I had the biggest crush on him.

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
I usually freely chat, unless it's an artist that I have a silly school girl crsuh on. cause then I turn into a shy girl that has forgotten all of the languages I speak. One epic fail happening in slow motion.

I didn't actually get paid for the work, haha! I had a full-time job and did this on the side. Lotta sleepless nights editing interviews/gig & album reviews and photo editing! Would love to get back into it as I still have a lot of industry & band friends but...it's a lot of work and with kid & husband and actual work...I have to settle on being a fan :) It's ok though, one of my Label Reps keeps taking personalised videos of ppl I adore at times *queue the blushing & making a high-pitched squeaky noise when I see them*

@ ProverbofHell

I agree! I tend to fan-girl a little, but not an obnoxious amount. Haha. I managed full sentences around Tim and everything! :P If they are acting like jerks, though...I'm over it. I'll just say that I've only met one band who kind of lessened my love of them. Otherwise, everyone has been great. (The list isn't that long, though.)
And that must have been an awesome job! I'm jealous. I've done some writing, and I was paid for a few pieces, but it has never been an actual job for me.

I have nothing else to offer. Except more stories that feature men you never thought you'd view that way. Lol.

@ PhenoBarbiDoll
Met so many musicians over the years when I was working as journalist/ editor for a metal website, most of them are just totally normal and the most down-to-earth, especailly when you treat them exactly like that. The ones that need their egos patted...can get lost!

...I dunno...I may have to ponder about this "deal" you want to strike!