so, i'd just like to mention first of all, you're the reason i even found out about this site and joined at all... since i was reading your story on quizilla... and well yeah.
not sure where to start, but this is ... just SO good. the last few chapters particularly, have been amazing and so intense. i love it all.
that was fricking amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!! k even that doesnt explain how great it was n how happy i am tht u updated but it'll have to do untill i discover (or possibly make up) the right word for the job!! :XD LOVED IT!!!!!!
You little minx!!! You didn't tell me you were writing! Last I heard, you were complaining about your issues and something about getting to the end of the chapter... wait, how dense am I? Arrgh, comprehend dammit! But I love it love it! It was nice to get the whole "Josh and Peyton" story, and from him, too. Sweet and oh so sad. Those crazy kids need to get it together. Still taking my breath away with your words, babe. (don't think I didn't notice the fuckityfuck in there! giggle alert!!!) Hopefully, this gets your inspiration going again. <3
you know what you should do? you know what you should do? you know what you should do? you know what you should do? you know what you should do? you know what you should do? you know what you should do? you know what you should do? you know what you should do???????????
because tis an amazing story one of the best Marianas Trench ones AND BECAUSE I AM AMAZING and have told one of my friends bout this story who in turn will tell another one of our friends!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So my dear. I finally read your story in it's entirety... and where the hell did you pull this amazing writing from!? Like... sweet jeebers! I wish I could write like you. I love love love peyton and josh's personalities... they're so real. It was also fantastic when she bitched at the record guy. And on the swings. Epic. <3
Aaack! My mother is in your story! Well, the nicer, more sane version is, anyway. Dear sweet Jesus, I'm sooo proud of you!!! Was not expecting this, nope. Damn, I'm a good poker, ain't I? All kidding aside, I love it -- how your words flow, your detailed little personality additions, and everything else I've ever told you. This should be reason enough why you should never doubt your writing. <3 It's not crazy to talk to your pet! I used to do it before my dog died. Then again, I talk to my food and other inanimate objects, too, so the jury must still be out on me. Hope this means you're not giving up. Oh, and just for old times sake (and because I miss it so) -- :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms: :arms:
ZOMG YOUR ALIVE!!! AND SO's THE STORY!!! YEY!!! *dances then tackle hugs* I MISSED THIS STORY!! NO ONE ELSE WRITES GOOD JOSH STORIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D
okay, so i lied. i deprived myself of precious sleep and finally caught up. so, seeing as how my sleep-hungry brain is having problems forming sentences, all i have is this: Awww... kids. they sooo love each other, it's sweet. it's a wonderful feeling to laugh while still feeling all mushy. does that even make sense? <<<okay, so i just discovered these. this is how my head feels right now, sorry no long message. just keep it up, i love it!!!
Hey! I just read the first chapter and it's so well written :] i really like the little quirks in the story, it makes it interesting to read--and the tesion between Josh and Peyton! Just...absolutely fabulous! Well done, keep writing :]
OMG SO SO SO SO SOO AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! seriously miss doubts-herself i love this story and obviously im not the only one!! so HA! also i cant wait for more... tho i know that it's gunna take a bit... but hopefully you will update sooner?? =D ♥
Oh my GAHD, that last chapter was very WOW. The use of middle names, the term in love, bestfriends acting differently. It was all just WOW. So I kind of wanted to make this comment long but, damn, that last chapter has left me speechless.
not sure where to start, but this is ... just SO good. the last few chapters particularly, have been amazing and so intense. i love it all.