Okay, first up, let me just commend your music choice in this chapter. In This Moment, are you in my Spotify? I love it! Bitches Brew is also very fitting.... urgh! I am loving!
"Because..." She reached behind her and unclasped the garment. "You're one of my favorite smooth-talking rock stars." Yup, can understand this fully!!
That was short and sweet, hot and steamy! What a girl would do to get that chance! Oh Richard, you sexy man beast!!!!
"Change" does work very well! And people say you can't dance to rock/metal. Pfft. Lol.
As soon as I heard "Happy Times," I thought... Well, first I thought DAMN because he sounds ridiculously sexy... But then I thought it would be good to dance to. I considered using "A Million Degrees," too. The music is hot, but the lyrics kinda kill it. Haha.
Glad he wasn't wearing his usual 50 extra belts because I imagine that would've been hella annoying to wait for him to take them off. I also vote that she charges Daniel extra for ruining her g-string. That shit ain't exactly cheap.
Hi! (It's Jessii Tara! Changed my profile theme. :D)
So, I've only had the chance to read the first chapter so far and whoa, what an intro. Happy Times is a particular favorite Emmigrate song of mine, which I had for some reason not thought of as a song that's perfect for being played in a strip club, but you've just changed that. Because it works so well. Almost as well as Change by Deftones. :D
Awesome start! I'll be back soon with another comment on the second part as soon as I get the chance to read!
P.S. Killer layout. That red, white, and black aesthetic is something I live for!
Oh Richard, you handsome man(referring to the pic at end of update) !
That was a pretty quick, intense fuck. In the backroom of a strip club. Ewhhh, I don’t even want to k ow what other bodily fluids are on that leather couch.
Boxer briefs all the way though, men’s slips would just...make him look like an old man...which is obviously a...well. I’ll shut up.
It’s fun how he tries to prove himself, keeping somewhat to the “no touching” rule...but mate: you did not just fall and happen to slip your dick into her
I really like how you've started this, the fact that Richard is somewhat hesitant makes me wonder what will happen next and the piece is easily read as an original for anyone (like me) who isn't familiar with the people.
I cant wait!