Fears in the Water - Comments

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spring nichtx:

oh jeez I'm jealous
I wish I could write songs ...

Anyone can write songs! :) Just....not as good as others. Haha. But seriously: All I do is make a title and BAM. Out pop the vocal lines and lyrics and instrumental parts. XD Keep practicing, spring nicht! Did youever write any songs? Cause I'd love to read them! :D

I wrote one.
It was horrible.

Vampire Heart; This one was really good. I loved the second verse the best. "Send me back to my sanctuary, my haunted sanctuary," was an awesome line, too. :]

Sorry I'm reading them so slow, though. I've got a really bad tooth ache and it's killing my concentration. @_@ I can't sit still 'cause it's driving me crazy.

Unforgiven; "for the flower dead between the pages in my story" was by far the best line, I think. (Although in the first verse there were lots of good ones, too.) This song was malicious. XD I agree it was really angry, but it was so graceful at expressing anger. It was beautiful. I loved it. <3

Love Is Dead (Private Sanctuary); This was a good one, too, and it left a good impression. I couldn't really pick my favorite line, there were some pretty good ones though. I love it when you add in German, and you know that. XD

Off-topic in regards to the story but I have to go for a bit, and then I'll be back to read more. <3

About Raven Heart; Wow. I think this is my new favorite. There were just so many great lines in it. I highlighted like three or four trying to choose between my favorite and I just couldn't. XD I really liked it. You did an awesome job with this one. <3 Definitely one of your best.

About Black Fate; "break the ties that bind I'll not try to fight"... I loved that line. I really think this song was very inspiring actually. After reading I'm kind feeling more inclined to write, actually. XD I don't know how that happened, I didn't expect it. Your lyrics are just so awesome, DDP. <3

More on topic on the song, though, I like the feel of it. I don't know how to describe it, but the song made me feel happy. XD

spring nichtx:

oh jeez I'm jealous
I wish I could write songs ...

Anyone can write songs! :) Just....not as good as others. Haha. But seriously: All I do is make a title and BAM. Out pop the vocal lines and lyrics and instrumental parts. XD Keep practicing, spring nicht! Did youever write any songs? Cause I'd love to read them! :D

oh jeez I'm jealous
I wish I could write songs ...

Love is Dead was amazing
you're really good :)

Who the HELL subscribed to this!?! I need to know. X(

hey thanks for the song Never Again.
it is really really good.
and i really appreciate it a lot.
&& to let you know I appreciate you for writing it.

XD love it!

"Never Again" was really good. Actually I was reading it while listening to Denied by Sonic Syndicate, and so I imagined the words going along with the beat of their song. XD It actually sounded really good in my head. ^^

"My cards left me nothing else to choose from." = AWESOME LINE! I loved that. :D I loved the song too. <3

This is really really good :]]] you need more comments

I really liked "Heaven's Eyes", it was really sweet of you to write something up for those people. <3 I think that you expressed the emotions the parents must've been feeling really well. It made me really sad just reading. T_T

"save me the lies and spare me the truth" = awesome line. I loved the song too. Thanks for telling me to comment, I hadn't noticed this. XD Ah, I'm such an oblivious person. Thank yoooou for the song. <333 It'll help me on my way to finishing the next chapter. :D