Wow. Nice of him to share an update on Elena, and I have a definite sense of foreboding based on the life advice and his comments on the time he has left...
Right here when putting emphasis on this phrase "...little too much goofing off was a bit of an..." then immediately putting a thought " Better to get the ass chewing over with now" makes it a little confusing as to what's a thought and what's emphasis. It caught me off guard a bit when I was reading through since there is a lot of italics in the chapter and while I was able to differentiate by the action lines immediately following or before, it was still something that messed with the flow for me personally.
I don't actually watch Narcos, so I'm going to be commenting as someone from the outside so I'll do my best.
I'll start with the classic comment: Layout. I don't find layouts to be all that important, but yours compliments your story well and it's really nice to look at.
Summary: I know in your blog you mentioned you weren't happy with it? I think it's great, however it sounds more like a small chapter than an actual summary. It's a bit long, but I still think it sounds nice and gets the point across nicely.
Chapter: Like I said I don't know the show much, so I can't comment on how true to character this is. What I can say is that I didn't immediately notice any errors. My only issue is the switch between thoughts and normal text, it often didn't stand out and broke up the paragraphs a bit which messed with the flow. Otherwise, though everything was great.
The poor man has a LOT of catching up to do.