May 6th, 2020 at 03:59am
This story hit me right in the heart (and the guts) because we've all been at that breaking point before. And I definitely relate to the main character (at least in terms of having enough of not being happy and wanting to make some changes). You wrote these two chapters really well and I can imagine her (the main character) just sitting there on the floor, reflecting on her life, than suddenly going, "Fuck it, I'm gone! Byeee!" in a comical but bad ass manner.
I can't wait to read more soon.
The second chapter is just as well written, the feeling of knowing that she deserves better and yet she still hopes that he finds someone.
It hits hard, it's straight to the point and raw. Loved it!