Best Friends - Comments

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Hello, I'm here to (finally) comment for the Text / Chat Contest!

This was cute! It was super light-hearted but sweet, while also making for an easy read. I liked the way you wrote the friendship between Koa and Harrison - it seemed effortless and easy, the way that the best kind of friendships are. My only negative is that I wish it were a bit longer, as I felt that it sort of ended a little abruptly? I also felt like the way you incorporated the text felt a little awkward, but overall I thought that with Harrison being the quick witted one out of the two, it felt more natural for him to say the line 'you can try, but you're gonna miss me'. Overall, I liked this and it def made me smile when reading it. Thanks for entering!

Thank you

“Pretty sure she’s used that one before, perhaps she had to take her biological clock in for a service...”

Okay, LMFAO. That was extremely witty and funny! That was my favorite part!

Overall, I really liked this piece! It was super playful and fun! You did a really good job capturing the prompt in a short piece.

Loved it