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  • SomethingEdge

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    O.o nooooooooooooo
    it can't end
    bah i feel depressed
    esp about ben
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    nice writing skills though
    x
    October 10th, 2008 at 08:24am
  • evie may.

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    Amazing, doll!
    Such a brilliant ending to a great story.
    I personally don't like most happy endings, so this was perfect, in my eyes.

    I had to re-read the last line nearly five times before it sunk in.
    And yes, it wrenched the shit out of my emotions.
    October 9th, 2008 at 03:38am
  • kitsune-chan

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    *shrieks* OMG LOOK A COMMENT!!!!!!!!!update?

    I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I seriously almost burst into tears when I read that there was only one chapter left. DON'T LEAVE US HANGING!!!!!!!!!
    October 1st, 2008 at 04:47am
  • SomethingEdge

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    LAST CHAPTER
    O.o
    NOO!
    I don't want it to end
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    intertwined??
    interested I am

    I like the sound of this alec character
    hmmm

    can't wait
    well I can but I don't want to
    =]
    October 1st, 2008 at 04:11am
  • googoogirl

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    well, I see you took the "add more detail" advice and applied it :)

    just wanted to send in my post. and how do stars work anyway? is it based on how many comments or readers or something?
    September 30th, 2008 at 10:44pm
  • googoogirl

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    So.... anything we can do to, er, aid the next post....?
    September 28th, 2008 at 05:59pm
  • Eyes On Fire

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    holy crap! Hells yes for Kimmy beating Ada!!
    September 16th, 2008 at 08:08pm
  • Satorin

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    your story is very original, but i would have to agree with the person above it would be way better if you were more describing. not to describe only emotions but the surroundings and also you more words. but i still like it!!!
    September 10th, 2008 at 08:17am
  • isminips

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    your story is original and way you write is nice! it would be nice if you were describing a little more not only emotions but and other things but still your story is really good keep posting!
    September 9th, 2008 at 03:43pm
  • SomethingEdge

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    I fear for ben
    September 9th, 2008 at 01:32pm
  • SomethingEdge

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    O.o
    September 9th, 2008 at 01:32pm
  • twiggeh

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    Hooray for update!! Its great, I can't wait to see what happens next :]
    September 9th, 2008 at 05:32am
  • twiggeh

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    Hooray for update!! Its great, I can't wait to see what happens next :]
    September 9th, 2008 at 05:32am
  • SomethingEdge

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    O.o
    stupid girl
    [ada]
    oh noes
    drugs are bad m-kay
    <3
    September 6th, 2008 at 02:40pm
  • evie may.

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    Brilliant, as always.
    Damn.
    I almost felt sorry for Ada!
    September 5th, 2008 at 06:41am
  • SomethingEdge

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    it's ada isnt it
    gosh shes stupid
    I mean
    I don't know
    =]
    love love love
    September 1st, 2008 at 12:05pm
  • twiggeh

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    This is a freaking incredible tory, I've been so sucked in MORE PLEASE!
    That Ada, I had her picked out as a traitor, the beyotch. Though I wish I had violet eyes!

    I shall be waiting for the next update.
    August 30th, 2008 at 04:58am
  • Eyes On Fire

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    Yes!! Finally Ben and Kimmy admit their love for each other!!

    Bravo!!
    August 29th, 2008 at 06:32pm
  • SomethingEdge

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    ahh shit
    ^that is exactly how I would react
    just because I'm weird like that
    I mean you confess your love and then damn!
    tragic
    twist
    <3
    August 27th, 2008 at 02:56pm
  • evie may.

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    Adored the updates.
    :]
    August 27th, 2008 at 12:24am
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