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    I am so relieved Mia escaped! And so relieved Jessica didn't loose her dad and uncle over becoming a vampire. Ah! This story just keeps getting better and better!! Clap
    I love the links between the two main characters and their families. I can't wait to read what happens next!
    November 19th, 2022 at 09:38am
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    Wow! Just wow! I am a little speechless!
    I need to know what is going to happen! With Mia, with Jessica, will they both be vampires?! Oh my goodness, I love this story!!
    Thanks for the shout out BTW!
    Can't wait for more to read!
    November 16th, 2022 at 12:17pm
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    Love it!
    Spencer giving me all the bad vibes though.
    Can't wait to see what happens next.

    In the Mia chapter I think something has been posted twice. A few paragraphs right in the middle when Spencer is first mentioned, doesn't make sense. But it's repeated later on and makes perfect sense.
    Just wanted to point it out.
    Awesome chapters
    November 12th, 2022 at 09:53am
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    Brilliant start!
    This is the first of its kind of story for me, I don't usually read crossovers etc but I love this so far!!! Flows really well.
    Excited to see where it goes x
    November 10th, 2022 at 04:11pm