Dont say you love me..... - Comments

How can i describe that story?
Who knows.
All i know is that the way you write is truly incredible.
<3

thanks die<3333
ur a fucking inspiration IFLY woman x]]
yeah il keep what you said in mind<3333

and no joey, i dont think there shall be slash in this story after all, maybe with some differnt characters, right now its too painful...as im sure u know....

But yeah. Make spaces and read through everything before you post. Other wise people complain about that more then the actual story it self.

Well done!
You write extremely well for a first time author. I loved how you started it, and had action in it for the first chapter. Keep going, I would like to see how you grow as an author, you could make it with the big shots.

For a moment there I thought it was turning into slash . But meh ;; once I knew exactly how that guy felt

SHIT! i forgot the goddamn spaces x_x
il make a layout for the next chapters that way il be sure to have spaces "ohsotragic" x]]

and yeah thanx guys =]
chapter 3 may take awhile do to the fact i have some shit starting up again in my life =]

I love it.
Memories. <3

Reminds me of something .. Someone :\

sure thing dude :D
lol sorry it was the first time I actually posted a story and i actually wrote it in various pms to myself [yes..im that cool xD]
so when it came to putting it together it slipped my mind to put in the spaces x]]
but no worries im writing the 2nd chapter right now and I'll be sure to add in the spaces x]]
and thanx for the comment<33

i likey =]
but could yoo please space it out a bit more?
its late and my eyes hurt lol
but other than that
tis good!