Life of a Teenager - Comments

  • zillaidma

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    Pretty short chap, but i like the idea that there is more!!! And better!!! Clap keep it coming please!! :D Clap Clap Clap
    June 24th, 2008 at 08:31am
  • zillaidma

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    :lmfao I think Its hilarious how her brother was reading her diary and she hadn't mind at first until she heard 'Jason" in the sentence! Ha Ha :lmfao Clap :D

    i love your first story! It funny and it relates to me becasue i'm about to start highschool too, just like Bailee!
    Hmm...i'll give you a tip:
    Instead of using the name Bailee everytime she's going to do something, say 'she', or , 'as she', or 'as Bailee'. :D

    but please take this on the good side, i want your story to be successful so it could get 10 stars! Clap :D :lol: Nyam

    so, tell me when you update! I want to read the next chapter! Dance i'll be waiting! :file: Nyam Naughty Clap Clap :D
    June 21st, 2008 at 03:24am
  • hengstin.

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    i like it! little siblings are always annoying; as are younger cousins. i would know! :evil:
    June 14th, 2008 at 02:49am