I'd Rather Shut My Eyes - Comments

Lol, I have dinner in five minutes. When I was little and I got angry, I wouldn't eat...but then I'd just have a spoonful of breakfast, and keep eating. Angrily.

Yeah, I remember reading this book where the character had a poster of New York City at night on her wall. And I was trying to make it sound like an average room, not really plain and not OTT. I'll probably add more tomorrow, cos I have study tonight for my two last exams. But yay for people reading it! I'm so exciting, that's why I'm putting out so many chapters (I'm thinking of them on the spot). But I've run out of ideas past the next chapter, so give me a few hours or so and it should have 5 chapter fragments worked out.

aw, that's horrible! I have a really fast metabolism, so my body uses energy too fast for me to be able to miss a meal (or snacks in between)
Hm... I AM kind of hungry... I just got up a few minutes ago.

Ok, I want her room! I think it'll be really really cool with scenes of the world. Especially New York above her bed ^_^
Ha, I tried not talking once, and My mom got me to talk by not letting me have any food unless I verbally asked for it. -_-
I did last a few hours though :P
More Soon?

Yeah, I suck at the whole "starting in Belleville". Maybe the next story will be like that. But I thought it was an alright twist.

And I seriously sat there for about ten minutes trying to come up with a non-lame takeaway name. And it's still lame.

Well this day sucks. I have missed out on breakfast, because I woke up too early, got up too late, threw on a jumper to go to the breakfast hall, then got told off for wearing pyjama pants. THEY'RE WARMER THAN ANYTHING I HAVE!!!!! So I came back up here, checked the clock and thought 'Well, I just can't be bothered getting changed and going down with no-one there and likely, no breakfast.' I'm pretty hungry through

Oh, that was pretty creepy to start with xD
Aw, I like Kim, he sounds like the guy version of me xD
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moving to Belleville?
Interesting twist. Should've expected it though... Well, i guess not...
MORE SOON PLEASE!

*subcribes*i love this story!its so diffrent!!!<3333333333

Yay! PEOPLE INTEREST!!! Hopefully it's a big twist. DUNDUNDUH!!! Especially with that lead up. I'm so excited.

Also, I sometimes have a tendency to get mental blocks or just not feel like adding. But hopefully I do, with people here! Boarding school and super homework might get in the way though. Hmm....

oh okie ^_^
just a tip, for italics, put insert text here [/i ] Just take out the space in the last set of [ ]'s ^_^
Anyway.
Ooooh, who's at the phone? O.O
More soon?

Yeah it is on purpose, it's supposed to be in italics. For her thoughts. Sorry bout that, thought the italics had copied over. Obviously didn't.

This looks like its going to be awesome, although, I'm not sure if ur doing it on purpose, but sometimes you go from 3rd person to 1st person, it keeps changing...
Can't wait for more!