A Painful Life - Comments

this is really good! please write more

akatsuki_wolf45:

And another thing;

it really seems like Yumi is taking the place of Sasuke in the story. I mean, its your story, but in the manga and anime Orochimaru is after Sasuke and Orochimaru gives Sasuke the curse mark and Itachi killed Sasukes clan and Sasuke wants to get revenge on the killer....just like Yumi, except that Orochimaru killed her clan and Orochimaru just wants the tailed demon inside her, which is really the Akatsuki's job.

But its your story. It's kind of confusing at some points, but I really like it!

Hehe. Your comments made me smile. :)
Someone did tell me about the Sharingan eye. It's just that in an episode, Orochimaru told Kakashi that he gave him the eye.
Yeah, it's true. Yumi is sorta taking Sasuke's place. And I know it may seem confusing cuz it all turns out in the forest of death and after the Chunin exams.
Don't worry everything will be cleared. Thanks for your comments! xxx

And another thing;

it really seems like Yumi is taking the place of Sasuke in the story. I mean, its your story, but in the manga and anime Orochimaru is after Sasuke and Orochimaru gives Sasuke the curse mark and Itachi killed Sasukes clan and Sasuke wants to get revenge on the killer....just like Yumi, except that Orochimaru killed her clan and Orochimaru just wants the tailed demon inside her, which is really the Akatsuki's job.

But its your story. It's kind of confusing at some points, but I really like it!

Hey i just thought you should know that Orochimaru didn't give Kakashi the sharigan eye.

His friend Obito Uchiha gave it to him before he died, because after he got the cut thats now the scar on his eye, he couldn't use that eye anymore. So Obito gave Kakashi his Sharigan eye.

So far I'm liking the story!

Tambry:

dude whats with all the imposters! i know the lee at the en is not the real lee because he knows her name! i lov th naruto show! and dude this is a good story! keep updating!

Thank you so much for reading it, and I don't get what you mean about Lee... But I will keep updating! :D

dude whats with all the imposters! i know the lee at the en is not the real lee because he knows her name! i lov th naruto show! and dude this is a good story! keep updating!

Thanks so much Saskea for writing chapter 18! It's amazing. Well, guess it's my turn to write chapter 19 then. We're going to take turns and I'll also write that in the story.

hey thanks for adding saskea

I looooooooooooooooooove it!

LOVe the second chapter! i also love the cliff hanger!

hey, love the story!! keep on writing!!