this is really good! please write more
July 30th, 2009 at 09:49am
Hehe. Your comments made me smile. :)
- akatsuki_wolf45:
- And another thing;
it really seems like Yumi is taking the place of Sasuke in the story. I mean, its your story, but in the manga and anime Orochimaru is after Sasuke and Orochimaru gives Sasuke the curse mark and Itachi killed Sasukes clan and Sasuke wants to get revenge on the killer....just like Yumi, except that Orochimaru killed her clan and Orochimaru just wants the tailed demon inside her, which is really the Akatsuki's job.
But its your story. It's kind of confusing at some points, but I really like it!
Thank you so much for reading it, and I don't get what you mean about Lee... But I will keep updating! :D
- Tambry:
- dude whats with all the imposters! i know the lee at the en is not the real lee because he knows her name! i lov th naruto show! and dude this is a good story! keep updating!