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  • xdawnx

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    LOL I love what Bill said at the end. The whole vampire thing was a big surprise. I had to do a double-take while reading. I also loved where the one girl tried to assault them using like in the middle of her sentence. Ugh I hate when people do that. XD It's easy to relate to the characters feelings, and that's great!
    June 30th, 2008 at 07:53pm
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    Aw, that was sweet of you to mention me. XD But really, I liked this chapter. The insults were very creative and befitting. <3 Can't wait for your next update.
    June 26th, 2008 at 05:31am
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    Oh yays. :D I didn't realize you'd posted this until just now. ;3 I really like the story so far, though. (Even though I already told you over email I felt like I should leave a comment, too! ^^ )
    June 20th, 2008 at 08:29pm
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