Adventures in Babysitting - Comments

OMG, momma!!! that's soooo sad!!! *cries* me thinks me get it...omg. well anyway, that was amazing, again!!! update soon. OH and btw, the way frankie spells it, it's bela, not bella. he's just a freak like that!! well update soon!!!

<3<3 Adele!!

No. It wouldn't be...

And don't worry! I'll probably update today. But to warn you guys, I may not update in a while. I have to go back to Hell tomorrow....(specimens also call it 'School')

I adore this story...'cause it's adorable. Update soon otherwise I may just have a mental break-down.

And, yes, that would not be good.

awwww that's got to be the cutest thing i've ever read!!!!! here are some of my favorite parts

1)Uncle Man-with-the-plan! lolzz
2)Now, who would be scared a guy with twenty million tattoos, a lip ring, black and blonde hair, and red eyeliner? Now, that’s just silly!
3)“I’m gonna go....read Ecstacy...again!” How many times has Mikey read that now? Five hundred seventy-four million?
4)What was everyone so afraid of? We’ve all been/lived in Jersey. What, was there are murderer on the loose that I didn’t know about? Cause I’ll kick his ass if he comes near me. BAM!
5)She held out her tiny hand and looked away blushing again. What the hell was she doing? Think Iero Think! Use that brain of yours! What do little kids always do at street corners. Panhandle? No, you dumbass! Beg? Sometimes. What was it? Oh yeah!
6) I was kinda sad when we reached the sidewalk and she let go. My hand was cold again... AWWWW that's sooooo cute!!! frankie loves her!!!
7) There’s someone in the world shorter than me. That’s a plus!
8)So, we headed off to the mall! There’s probably only one thing on Gee’s mind right now. Coffee. Let’s see if I’m right. When we got to the mall, we pushed through the big glass doors and entered the food court. “I’m going to get coffee!” Gee told me, smiling. Yep. I was right. woot!
9)Adele and I went next door to Hot Topic. They sell kids clothes there, right? When we got inside, I got a bunch of stares. Right. Legend in Jersey. Forgot that. I smiled and shrugged at the random fans. They turned away. “Um, Adele,” I said to her. She looked up at me with her big green eyes again. Heart melter.... (i like this paragraph cause it's funny and cute!!)
10)“I’m done!” she exclaimed in her high little kid voice. Aww. Too cute.

“Um, okay,” I replied bluntly. She’s easy to shop for. I’m down with that.

I took the hangers out of her small hands (which were now red) and looked at the findings. A dead bunny t-shirt (which was pretty damn cute!) and the Dead! sweatshirt. I’m so proud of her! “All right, let’s go pay then.” We went over to the counter and put the stuff down.

“Forty-two fifteen,” the clerk said. She had orange hair and a lip ring that connected to the earrings with a chain. I handed her the money. “Thank you,” she said, bagging our things, “Come again.” She handed us the bag and we left. Wait a second. Did she just wink at me? Maybe. Possibly. Yes....Whatever though!
LoL i love all of this!!!
11)“Yea!” I exclaimed. I started to dance. People stared. “I love you Gerard!”

“Cool,” Gerard replied smiling like crazy. More people stared. I turned.

“What are you looking at?” Everyone turned away quickly. A lot ran.
12)When we got back to the bus, there wasn’t total chaos. Bob was asleep and Ray was listening to his headphones. Gerard had to find Mikey. “I got you coffee!” Gerard yelled. With that, Mikey came running out and tripped over the threshold in the process. He mouthed ‘Thank you’ and and took the coffee from Gerard. I turned to Adele. She was siting on on of the chairs, her feet just barely dangling over the seat as she swung her legs back and forth. Did I mention how cute she is? (this is lolzz and awwww!!)
13)I leaned against the doorway. “Whatcha doing?” I asked.

She turned. “Playing.”

“With what?” I really wanted to know what the fuck that doll thing was. It was tiny, that’s all I know.

“Wee Ninja,” Adele said throwing him at me. He hit me in the face. Who dare touches my face?! No, I’m kidding. *WEE NINJA!!!!!!*
14)“Frankie?” I heard. It was Adele. I turned around.

“Yeah?” I asked. Did I forget to say goodnight?

“Can I ask you a question?” she asked. She just did, but I’ll cut her some slack.

“Sure,” I replied, “What is it?”

“Are you my new dad?” she asked. My jaw almost dropped. *awwwww*
15)What I do know is that Adele’s gonna make me cry by the end of the week by how cute she is! *again, awwwwwww*

i didn't know you could write all this fluffy stufff, but it's sooooo cute but funny at the same time!!! sorry that list of favorites is sooooo long, i just liked everything!!! omg, you need to update asap, or i'll kick your ass!!! ByeBye!!!!

You all love it that much? Really?

awww that's so cute!

write more!...love it!

That was really REALLY GOOD!! I dont normal post stuff either sooo.... PLEAZE WRITE MORe!!!

okay, i'm sorry i keep commenting, but there's three things i want to say.
1) Gerard: Yeah, frank's right
Frank (in his head): wait, i'm right?? lolzz sooo funny
2) Uncle Ray, it sounded weird, kind of like a tv game show host. Hahaha that's sooo funny, lmfao!!!! lolzz
3) i love how everything they do comes back to them being from Jersey, like 'we can take care of a kid, i mean, come on, were from Jersey' i just think that's funny.
great job, again, and you better put up more really soon!!!!!

okay, before i forget, i was just rereading chapter 1 and i realized that i didn't mention this, when i ment to. what is with mikey and tosters?!?!? i mean, i know that it's a running joke, with mikey and the toster thingy, but why??? i don't get it, do you???

oh my god that is just adorable frankies turned into like a sortof dad in about 2 seconds

holy fucker, that rocked!!!! the only thing is that there manager's name is BRIAN, not ryan, but other than it totally ROCKES!! and why the fuck did u make me the baby????? i know in the discription u say i fall in love with him, but still...why am i always related to ppl in mcr in stories?!?!? oh well, i don't care. I'd like to see how u portray me as a five year old, it should be fun!! update soon!!!! OR ELSE!!!

that fuckin rocked. love it

Did you read chappie two?

Holy crappy, that was awsome, you better fucking update soon, i'll be waiting!!!