Alicia!! Brilliant!!! I finally realized who Edward and Ethan were! I know, a little slow, but I got it. Anways, great chapter. I love how the words flow easily with each other!! Keep it up and update soon!
Hey Alicia!! This is a good story from what I read. But I think you should make the font bigger, it's kind of hard to read. Just a heads up, other than that great!!! Update soon!
I finally realized who Edward and Ethan were! I know, a little slow, but I got it.
Anways, great chapter. I love how the words flow easily with each other!!
Keep it up and update soon!