Sweet Music - Comments

  • The.Need.

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    Alicia!! Brilliant!!!
    I finally realized who Edward and Ethan were! I know, a little slow, but I got it.
    Anways, great chapter. I love how the words flow easily with each other!!
    Keep it up and update soon!
    June 21st, 2008 at 06:02am
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    Wow this was great!
    I loved how the lyrics went well with the story itself.
    It gave me the chills!
    Update soon!
    June 21st, 2008 at 01:45am
  • Archi.tects

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    I love that song, it's called 'I Don't Want To Miss A Thing' ;)
    I used it in my story too.
    I like your writing, hope you update soon :)
    June 20th, 2008 at 10:37pm
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    Hey Alicia!!
    This is a good story from what I read.
    But I think you should make the font bigger, it's kind of hard to read.
    Just a heads up, other than that great!!!
    Update soon!
    June 20th, 2008 at 05:14pm