This story is beautiful. I'm in love with it. =]
July 4th, 2008 at 12:12am
It was just, beautiful.
So much impact on such a simple story.
It was amazing, really.
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June 24th, 2008 at 10:54pm
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You dazzle me, you blow me away. I'm practically speechless. Not quite, obviously.
Oh, Shal, it was beautiful. And sad. And happy. And amazing, of course <3
You are so incredibly talented :cute:
Ryan was so ... colourful -smile- His character was drawn so brightly and sharply and I just wanted to hold him and whisper secrets into his ear. He'd want to hear them. I'd go and I'd come back and he'd run up and tug at my collar and whisper into my ear for more secrets. And I'd probably tell him :tehe:
Oh, Ryan. You are beautiful.
The whole story was this perfect mix of detailed detail and hazy vague; the important, the general, but then the intricate and fascinating. You're an artist. This was a landscape, beautifully captured background and foreground. Bizarre and normal.
I think one of the things I loved so much was that you - besides the flash to "when he was four" on the plane - didn't mention his age (I think. I might have missed it, how embarassing) - he was instead ... kind of a perfect child? You could describe him as one, "a child", as "a boy" as "young" and you'd have to leave it there, and people would be able to guess between a range, but I don't think they would. "Young." "A boy." "A child." It suffices.
I adore the last line :cute:June 22nd, 2008 at 11:04am -
you have so much talent babe <3
someday, before i'm 80 years old, i'll try and review.June 20th, 2008 at 08:30pm -
I like this story. It's very heartfelt, and it's different from all the celeb-romance-slash-crap that I keep seeing.
Plus I LOVE the layout!June 20th, 2008 at 04:34pm -
I think it's sweet.June 20th, 2008 at 11:52am
