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  • bullets are hailing.

    bullets are hailing. (250)

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    This was amazing and it really captivated me!
    My interpretation is that she was addicted to drugs and she thinks
    she needs it, but it's not doing anything to help her and it's really
    making her worse.
    Anyway, the one-shot was incredible and I'm also wondering
    what your interpretation was.
    July 9th, 2008 at 10:15pm
  • natzlovesyou

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    I love the way you wrote this. The words were just...wonderful. Really amazing.
    Well I can think of several interpretations...
    one, she was always made fun of, she was an outcast
    two, she was a druggie
    three, she was a normal kid but something happened to lead her to believe there was something wrong with her
    four, she had been dreaming all of this while she was on the hospital...
    I had more but I forgot.
    What was your original idea?
    June 22nd, 2008 at 07:30am
  • eew tomato soup!

    eew tomato soup! (100)

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    i loved your writing
    another chapter?

    :]
    June 22nd, 2008 at 04:14am
  • Gerard Arthur Way

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    wow... this is..... sad... and... something to think about.... but I LOVE IT!!!! (and i'm not just saying not to hurt you, it IS really awesome!!)

    you should write moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

    ilyilyly!!
    keep writing :D :p xDD

    xoox
    <33
    June 21st, 2008 at 08:49pm