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  • xXletXmeXgoXx

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    amazing!
    August 31st, 2008 at 05:07am
  • AidenRose

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    really good story :D
    love it keep it up :D
    hehee
    August 22nd, 2008 at 10:14pm
  • xellllex

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    chriss, this is realllllllly good.
    yeah, some spell check may help,
    but stillll great. and im on the phone with youuu.
    XD
    August 14th, 2008 at 09:03pm
  • britteh

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    veryyy good ;]]
    it was very original.
    i deff want to keep up on this. xD
    July 28th, 2008 at 08:24pm
  • Serendipity.

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    I like it =]

    i agree, it's a very original idea xD

    and hmm how will she react? lol
    July 14th, 2008 at 11:27pm
  • FuriousXStarlight

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    I like it, its a very different and original idea. good job. :P
    July 13th, 2008 at 10:16pm
  • erinleigh4L

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    spell check would be good
    but its really good i think her
    sis should like try to smother
    her or something like that!!
    or be really evil to her and tell
    her lies about wats happening to her
    June 30th, 2008 at 05:43am
  • LullabyeLaura

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    Yup. I agree. ^^ But overall, it's pretty good.
    June 28th, 2008 at 03:43am
  • derangedcliche.

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    I like it. It's original. ^-^
    Different than other stories.
    Again....spellcheck may help.
    But other than that. I loved itttt. :]
    June 23rd, 2008 at 04:48am
  • SilentSoliloquy

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    A few spelling/grammar mistakes but looking good ^_^
    June 23rd, 2008 at 03:45am
  • krystell

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    I like itt.
    June 22nd, 2008 at 05:58pm