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  • Samm FTW

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    Awe, you are my favorite person online....

    EVER.

    <3

    I wish I could give you some Batman gummies, because you totally deserve them.
    August 24th, 2008 at 02:49am
  • knobby d.

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    :] Here comes the mega praise:
    First off, I have to say that I think it's awesome you used so many Say Anything references. I don't know a lot of people that listen to them, much less include them or their music in a piece of writing.
    Second, the story/idea itself was simple, but not at all predictable, which is something you've gotta love, considering the stories you usually find online. It definitely had surprises, was enjoyable, and well-written. It gave reason to subscribe... and shower you in comments. lol
    The third thing I have to say can be explained in two words- or names, rather:
    Brendon. Yurie. At first I was just really confused about that, but I get a pretty nice laugh out of it now. lol
    Fourth, I love the characters. I don't make the greatest explanations, but what I'm trying to say is that you didn't write a personality that would suit a situation or a reader; they were more human than that. lol

    And there were a lot less general things I liked about the story, like certain lines or scenes, but in order to remember that I'd have to go back... and I'm too lazy for that. lol
    Anywho, I guess all I have to say is you've got a fan in me, haha.
    August 24th, 2008 at 01:33am
  • knobby d.

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    xD Nice.
    August 19th, 2008 at 11:46pm
  • Samm FTW

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    haha. i literally laughed out loud. which is bad, because i'm fake sleeping so no one will bother me.

    haha.

    most action.
    August 19th, 2008 at 11:38pm
  • knobby d.

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    That's the most action I've had in a while. lmfaooooo
    August 19th, 2008 at 11:36pm
  • Samm FTW

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    =]

    I needed another character, so I just made her you. haha.
    August 19th, 2008 at 11:00pm
  • knobby d.

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    Aw, man. You didn't have to do that!
    How weird.... Thank you, though!
    Psh, your updates make my mibba day. Is that a sad thing to admit to? xD
    If it is, oh well. Most of the people I subscribe to take the attention their story gets for granted and never update on top of that. So kudos to you.
    August 19th, 2008 at 10:50pm
  • Samm FTW

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    lol. Thanks. You seriously make my Mibba day.

    =D
    August 18th, 2008 at 03:52am
  • knobby d.

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    That was amazing.
    And you need more love, man. I never comment one story this much, but it deserves more. It's kinda got me ticked off and I don't even write this. lol
    August 18th, 2008 at 01:26am
  • knobby d.

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    That was a pretty sad chapter.
    But it's about time she realizes she was doing something messed up! lol

    Hope you had a nice birthday :]
    August 16th, 2008 at 02:55am
  • knobby d.

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    A steamy chapter? All for me?
    :' ] You're gonna make me cry. haha
    August 10th, 2008 at 09:24pm
  • knobby d.

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    Ahaha, "or I kill the characters."
    Even little Kiki? You wouldn't.
    Not on Christmas! lol
    August 10th, 2008 at 09:08am
  • Holly Golightly

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    Wow this story is awesome
    you have to update again soon!!!
    August 7th, 2008 at 01:21am
  • knobby d.

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    I really like this story :]
    I thought you should know, because apparently no one has commented in over 30 days, which is pretty lame.
    August 3rd, 2008 at 08:50am
  • leahminor

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    MORE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE i will cry if you dont soon Cry Dance Hail
    June 27th, 2008 at 05:21pm
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