August 24th, 2008 at 02:49am
:] Here comes the mega praise:
First off, I have to say that I think it's awesome you used so many Say Anything references. I don't know a lot of people that listen to them, much less include them or their music in a piece of writing.
Second, the story/idea itself was simple, but not at all predictable, which is something you've gotta love, considering the stories you usually find online. It definitely had surprises, was enjoyable, and well-written. It gave reason to subscribe... and shower you in comments. lol
The third thing I have to say can be explained in two words- or names, rather:
Brendon. Yurie. At first I was just really confused about that, but I get a pretty nice laugh out of it now. lol
Fourth, I love the characters. I don't make the greatest explanations, but what I'm trying to say is that you didn't write a personality that would suit a situation or a reader; they were more human than that. lol
And there were a lot less general things I liked about the story, like certain lines or scenes, but in order to remember that I'd have to go back... and I'm too lazy for that. lol
Anywho, I guess all I have to say is you've got a fan in me, haha.
EVER.
<3
I wish I could give you some Batman gummies, because you totally deserve them.