So, I want to read this badly...but you may want to do something about the layout. The bright colours and light font make it hard to read. So please change the layout :)
you know, I absolutely understand how you feel, i used to love fall out boy and had a fall out boy story going but then when they jumped off the earth, i started LOVING a7x, and now they are my obsession, my favorite band and my world. you do what you need to do and if you do redo this story, let me know alright? [:
I luff it soo much and cn't wait for your next update!
" I sighed and hit the little green button. “Your local whoremonger here, I’m happy you choose me out of all the monger’s out there! Our special today is Bodacious Bohemian Bombshells! How may I assist with your horny needs?” "" Reading that out-loud at my friends house just wasn't a good idea. lol it was funny.
I have to be honest, when I first started to read this I thought this would be an okay story but it was.....THE MOST EFFING AMAZING THING I'VE READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope you keep up the good work and update soon!!!!!!!!!!!