Moribund - Comments

i decided to read it after all, very dark.. i liked it a lot babe!

i was going to read this story but the picture with the tongue TOTALLY freaked me out. i'm sorry babe

I love how he's taunting her, just like a child plays with its food.

This story is just so dark...and like ashestoashes said, it's a breath of intoxicating air.

I can't wait to read more.

OMFG, HOW IS THERE NOT ANY COMMENTS FOR THIS?

Haha. Comment Cherry. :mrgreen:

The picture is gorey and just by itself gave me chills.
It set the mood for the words.
The actual chapter? Fan-fucking-tastic!

Your writing is so superb. It's so intense and descriptive.
You're a breath offresh intoxicating air.
It's very hard to find pure talent these days... in anything.

I'm hooked already.
I wonder who the guy is... and I adore how he let her go.
The chase is always the best part.

You fulfill my senses with your writing. Just like her perfume fulfilled him. Whoever he is.