The picture is gorey and just by itself gave me chills. It set the mood for the words. The actual chapter? Fan-fucking-tastic!
Your writing is so superb. It's so intense and descriptive. You're a breath offresh intoxicating air. It's very hard to find pure talent these days... in anything.
I'm hooked already. I wonder who the guy is... and I adore how he let her go. The chase is always the best part.
You fulfill my senses with your writing. Just like her perfume fulfilled him. Whoever he is.