Torchwood- Forever - Comments

It was brilliant and I am in love with Torch wood I mean I cry when I see Ianto die and when the government official shoots his two daughters wife then himself.
The concept was great and you portrayed the characters perfectly.

Hii
im a big torchwood fan, and i really like the story:D
you have captured the characters well, i can actually imagine them say those lines
just thought id point out, because it is a mystery genre when there is a jump in scenes, it can be a little confusing becuase the reader doesnt know all the facts
but i liked it alot *hats off*
i wish there was more torchwood stuff on here
thanks for a good read:D