Under Fictitious Skies - Comments

I just skived my chores by reading this an I do not feel guilty. I LOVE THIS!
and Imma read the sequal now but why didnt this like have a gazzillion comment pages??? It angers me because alot crapper stories had a lot more.

hey, i like this story, you should updateXD

"My light." I mumbled dazed. "My light. It’s gone. My light. My light."

I'm sobbing right now.
Oh my god. I'm sobbing.
That was the best ending ever, but oh my god I'm sobbing.
I'm so glad there's a sequel but it's so sad...

Wow. I wish I would've found this story sooner...
It's brilliant. One hundred percent unadulterated brilliance.
I laughed. I cried. I gasped. I screamed, "OH MY GOD!"
I had these expressions on my face the whole time: :) :XD :brightside: omgno: :omfg: :twitch:
You are an excellent writer. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise.
This story was absolutely mind-blowing!
I'm gonna stop talking now.
-Ashley

Yes the sequel is finally up! =D

WHAT DID JUST HAPPEN?
HAYLEY WHAT DID YOU DO?
Oh wait there's a sequel :D

NOOOOO! IT'S SO FXN SAD! I'M CRYING no really, i'm crying THIS SUCKS!

there better be a sequal. But instead of killing Roxxiee...well, I'm gonna beat her up, too, I'm gonna kick Hayley's ass. Okay?

Is...she dead?
Will Josh ever be alright?
Will they ever find her?
What about her baby?
Why is this so fucking sad?
Why did she have to leave?
Are you making a sequel?
Will they ever love again?
Will Hayley's last vision become true?
Was it actually her daughter in that kast vision or herself a few years from now in the misery business?
Will everything be okay?

SO MANY QUESTIONS!
And if you're not doing a sequel I demand answers!
;)

*sniff*
that was sad...
does Hayley desert him? Does she get an abortion?
Does she go into hiding under the name Henrietta Veraza?
Does she slit his throat as she leaves his life?
TELL ME!
Pwease?

What. Are. You. Doing. ?. !. ?!.

I'm scared to find out. Really.

Gee.

That was so beautiful dear.
I'm sad it's ending.

NO! Hayley don't hurt josh like that! Bad Hayley! whoaa there are birthday balloons by my name... :)

I have no words for this.
It's great, and sad, and beautiful.

WHOA.
I haven't read a story like this in a while.
I guess some stories are meant to have an unhappy ending to be a happy story.
I think this story fits that.
Friggin Sweet man.
Great job.

Well, obviously everyone's on Hayley's side!
Personally, I've always enjoyed their dying love songs...
Am I weird?
Wait, on second thought don't answer that.

woww. this story just keeps getting better. please say there'll be a sequel

omg this story needs to end on a happy note! i'm all depressed and sadface now after reading chapter 48! but i'm excited to find out how hit ends!!!

I still can't believe what she did.
The nerve she had to tell Josh about Hayley's pregnancy.
It wasn't her decision to make.
And I don't understand Josh's anger.
Sure, Hayley kept it secret (well, not really, but secret from him) but she was still getting used to the fact that she is pregnant.
He should really cut her some slack on that.

Awsome as usual :)
cant wait for the next

OK. First things first,
That's four comments, yo, your imprisoned again. Deal with it ;) (well, since I last commented anyways. that's all that counts) :)

OK, so, Roxanna (hehe) is being the biggest bitch in the history of the world.
She's standing there with a smirk watching Hayley's whole world fall apart.
I can see why Hayley would regret telling Zac, because he told Rox.
Although she seriously needed to tell someone.
And, please, for the love of all that is holy, let Rox be run over by a car.
I know that's mean, but telling Hayley's secret was mean too.
She deserves it.
And if, perhaps, said car heard the crunch, backed up to see what went wrong, heard another crunch and drove over her again...well, meh.
I understand that Josh ran away for a bit, he needed to clear his mind, let go of his irrational anger. I mean, if she was like 3 months preggo I can see him being that mad, but two or three weeks isn't too bad considering the fact that she had to get used to the fact herself before divulging the information to him.
OK, really long comment but whatever.
Live up to your username girl :D