The Shorter the Skirt The Greater the Fame - Comments

  • Nanook

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    So I read this before and never commented... I'm not sure why I never did.
    This story, was seriously amazing. I was crying second to last chapter. lol, my sister saw me and asked what's wrong, that's how bad it was. XD
    The ending confused me a bit, because it really seemed like she went, and that honestly would've made more sense if she did. Don't get me wrong, I'm all for a happy ending, it just, seemed a bit off here, especially considering we didn't have any sign of recovery beforehand. It came as a nice surprise, but still made it a bit off.
    But, hey, I can respect you wanting to end it on a good note. And I still loved this story regardless. It was emotional, heartfelt, and really touching. I felt you conveyed Blake's emotions very well considering what she was going through, that transitioning, going from very actively social to kind of becoming more reclusive, was a very realistic concept that I commend you for. A lot of writers can't pull that off as well, or heck, don't even try with a lot of fan fics. So I really respect you for trying it and in my opinion, succeeded.
    It's been years since you posted this, but just thought I would comment to show you people are still stumbling across it. I loved it enough to read it again; I didn't comment initially since it was long since finished, but decided to this time since it really tugged at the heartstrings, still, the second time.
    So, great job. <3
    November 14th, 2017 at 02:13am
  • Irviee

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    :'(( omg this story made me cry like a baby! and 'peter pan' part, I love it. I always love peter pan. you are so awesome!
    March 6th, 2011 at 04:03am
  • alexisxx13

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    :O
    I criedd. !
    i <3 the endinqq .
    February 5th, 2011 at 02:35am
  • vmusicforlove

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    That made me cry! I thot she died! Haha i <3 it (:
    February 3rd, 2011 at 10:22pm
  • LaurenAshleyy

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    that was utterly amazingg*
    i never cry at all reading any story on heree...
    congrats missy cuz u made me:)
    i felt so sad cuz i thought she died and the last chapter is wat did ti for mee.
    once i read the last sentece i felt betterrr lol
    even though its lyk fake i still criedd.
    gahh im such a sappp
    December 31st, 2008 at 07:28am
  • in gold blood.

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    Wow, that really made me cry.
    Its brilliant.
    I don't know what to say...love it.
    <3
    December 11th, 2008 at 07:15pm
  • Chasing Sunsets

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    mega cutee =D
    i love it.
    update soon ?
    November 13th, 2008 at 04:54am
  • Xtina_RIOT

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    im seriously in love with this story
    October 7th, 2008 at 11:36pm
  • thnksfrthmmrs23

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    i love this
    October 1st, 2008 at 01:27am
  • To_Settle_The_Score

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    You are going to make me bawl...thanks. haha
    August 27th, 2008 at 01:09am
  • JustKarie

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    she has cancer rightt??

    love this storyy btww =))

    Settling in between her thighs. She looked up at me with this look in her eyes. I kissed her lips softly.
    "Are you sure?"
    "Make tonight", she said with a smile singing to the song.
    "Make tonight."
    and is thatl ike from a song? it deff should be
    August 25th, 2008 at 11:56pm
  • stay_awake88

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    i loveee your story!
    im still anxious to see what's wrong with her
    keep it uppp
    :D
    July 17th, 2008 at 08:14am
  • To_Settle_The_Score

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    Oh great update! That prednisone is a bitch, believe me, I take it. haha
    July 16th, 2008 at 02:44am
  • To_Settle_The_Score

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    This story is amazing!!! Update again soon???
    July 7th, 2008 at 03:16am
  • Kristin say WHAT?!

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    This is so good! I read this to my friend and we're addicted, write more? I HAVE to know what happens! :D
    amazing job!
    July 6th, 2008 at 02:57am
  • breakdown.

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    i like it, more soon please? :D
    July 1st, 2008 at 12:27am