November 14th, 2017 at 02:13am
The Shorter the Skirt The Greater the Fame - Comments
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:'(( omg this story made me cry like a baby! and 'peter pan' part, I love it. I always love peter pan. you are so awesome!March 6th, 2011 at 04:03am
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:O
I criedd. !
i <3 the endinqq .February 5th, 2011 at 02:35am -
That made me cry! I thot she died! Haha i <3 it (:February 3rd, 2011 at 10:22pm
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that was utterly amazingg*
i never cry at all reading any story on heree...
congrats missy cuz u made me:)
i felt so sad cuz i thought she died and the last chapter is wat did ti for mee.
once i read the last sentece i felt betterrr lol
even though its lyk fake i still criedd.
gahh im such a sapppDecember 31st, 2008 at 07:28am -
Wow, that really made me cry.
Its brilliant.
I don't know what to say...love it.
<3December 11th, 2008 at 07:15pm -
mega cutee =D
i love it.
update soon ?November 13th, 2008 at 04:54am -
im seriously in love with this storyOctober 7th, 2008 at 11:36pm
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i love thisOctober 1st, 2008 at 01:27am
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You are going to make me bawl...thanks. hahaAugust 27th, 2008 at 01:09am
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she has cancer rightt??
love this storyy btww =))
Settling in between her thighs. She looked up at me with this look in her eyes. I kissed her lips softly.
"Are you sure?"
"Make tonight", she said with a smile singing to the song.
"Make tonight."
and is thatl ike from a song? it deff should beAugust 25th, 2008 at 11:56pm -
i loveee your story!
im still anxious to see what's wrong with her
keep it uppp
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Oh great update! That prednisone is a bitch, believe me, I take it. hahaJuly 16th, 2008 at 02:44am
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This story is amazing!!! Update again soon???July 7th, 2008 at 03:16am
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This is so good! I read this to my friend and we're addicted, write more? I HAVE to know what happens! :D
amazing job!July 6th, 2008 at 02:57am -
i like it, more soon please? :DJuly 1st, 2008 at 12:27am
This story, was seriously amazing. I was crying second to last chapter. lol, my sister saw me and asked what's wrong, that's how bad it was. XD
The ending confused me a bit, because it really seemed like she went, and that honestly would've made more sense if she did. Don't get me wrong, I'm all for a happy ending, it just, seemed a bit off here, especially considering we didn't have any sign of recovery beforehand. It came as a nice surprise, but still made it a bit off.
But, hey, I can respect you wanting to end it on a good note. And I still loved this story regardless. It was emotional, heartfelt, and really touching. I felt you conveyed Blake's emotions very well considering what she was going through, that transitioning, going from very actively social to kind of becoming more reclusive, was a very realistic concept that I commend you for. A lot of writers can't pull that off as well, or heck, don't even try with a lot of fan fics. So I really respect you for trying it and in my opinion, succeeded.
It's been years since you posted this, but just thought I would comment to show you people are still stumbling across it. I loved it enough to read it again; I didn't comment initially since it was long since finished, but decided to this time since it really tugged at the heartstrings, still, the second time.
So, great job. <3