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  • aubs

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    I usually don’t read William Beckett stories, but I clicked on this one and I had to read it.

    The reminds me of 1984 so much that I couldn’t believe it. The slogan that you have put in this story so many times: War is peace. Freedom is slavery. Ignorance is strength. is the direct slogan that George Orwell used in his book. I mean, I don’t know if you meant for this story to be like 1984, but it is. Now, I am not bashing this story in anyway. I was just pointing it out.

    But overall, I really enjoyed reading this story!
    April 28th, 2010 at 01:33am
  • Spread-the-Rumors

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    this was amazing... ON TO THE SEQUAL!
    ^I was pretty much going to say the same thing^

    :lol: Great story!!
    May 23rd, 2009 at 11:54pm
  • TheyCallMeDame

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    this was amazing... ON TO THE SEQUAL!
    March 12th, 2009 at 01:48am
  • flesh for bones

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    I just read this all the way through...
    And it's easily one of the best stories I've ever read.
    You're an incredible writer.
    November 24th, 2008 at 12:15am
  • talking-bird.

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    i love this.
    last chapter was disgustingly fantastic.
    very, very original.
    September 25th, 2008 at 01:25am
  • maybememories

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    so i am the hugest orwell fan around and i definitely dug this.
    it was very, very well written.
    A+ :D
    August 3rd, 2008 at 05:17pm
  • method acting.

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    That was phenomenal. A perfect ending actually.
    I'm really shocked I'm not all "WHY KILL THEM FRANCES WHY?!"
    But I'm glad you did, it seems right (:
    August 2nd, 2008 at 08:30pm
  • breakthesky

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    oh my god. oh my god. oh my god.
    the end. is crazy. oh my god.
    wow. haha.
    i loved it though:]
    July 27th, 2008 at 07:11pm
  • brucepayne

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    last chapter made me cry
    :(
    July 23rd, 2008 at 03:18pm
  • forevermore90

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    Oh my... why?

    I understand that it had to end that way, bbut it was still upsetting. I still love the entire story though. Great job! *claps*

    Can't wait to see what else you come up with!
    July 23rd, 2008 at 08:47am
  • Smoke and Mirrors

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    I loved this.

    And somehow, I think there should be a sequel.
    July 23rd, 2008 at 07:24am
  • To_Settle_The_Score

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    I am crying, to be more precise bawling. Oh my goodness. I can't handle the thought. No TAI! Oh no. And Andrew McMahon too! That was a shocker! Oh my gooness so sad. Oh I don't think I can handle this. =( But I am going to keep my chin up and wait for your new story now. It was a great story. I loved it.
    July 23rd, 2008 at 02:35am
  • forevermore90

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    Oh my...

    I love every update. More soon please! XD
    July 21st, 2008 at 08:53am
  • Sailor Meranda

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    I must say, I still absolutely adore this story!
    July 21st, 2008 at 07:50am
  • To_Settle_The_Score

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    Seriosly my favorite story on here! This is amazing Frances! Damn that Saporta! Grr, I have never wanted to beat Gabe's ass before!
    July 21st, 2008 at 05:07am
  • Sailor Meranda

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    I loveed both updates! WOW!!!
    July 19th, 2008 at 09:44pm
  • is this Good Enough?

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    BILL IS AWTHOM.
    July 19th, 2008 at 05:14am
  • To_Settle_The_Score

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    This story amazes me everytime you update! I loved it once again!
    July 19th, 2008 at 12:24am
  • homewreckerx

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    I ENJOY THIS IMMENSELY.
    July 18th, 2008 at 09:06pm
  • To_Settle_The_Score

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    OOh she is taking on Bilvy! All that testosterone must be getting to her head. Because I know if I was in a room with a shirtless Bilvy I would be doing more than just thinking about his six pack. She isn't going to fight Mrotek? I find it funny when he is called that. haha
    July 15th, 2008 at 05:16am
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