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  • KranK

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    Wow!
    So it's over..
    It was a very beautiful.
    At times it was confusing for my small brain with all the large words and amazing description...<33
    i loved it to pieces.
    March 2nd, 2008 at 01:55am
  • poetic tragedy

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    :omfg: OMFG ELIZABETH, YOU UPDATED.

    Ah, I love the imagery in this chapter. I honestly can't pin-point an exact part that I loved, because to be honest, I love every single part of this.

    Also, I absolutely adore how you can take such gory words, actions, phrases, etc. and turn them into a piece of writing that is so beautiful.

    Just, alksdjrfalds!
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    &#9829;

    P.S.: I'm so sad it's finished! :] I think you ended it perfectly, though.
    March 2nd, 2008 at 01:52am
  • Fake your own death

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    I can't even write a review and I am not even gonna try. I'm just....lost for words. I can't even form a comment. I can't...I can't. Really. I love it.
    March 2nd, 2008 at 01:48am
  • BlackMaria

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    ...wow. just...wow. chapter 3? so fucking hot. at first i was alittle confused of how they were all lined up in the bathroom and how bert could be touching gee and frank wouldn't notice but i sorted it out.

    i know you read this a lot but you're a really good writer.

    oh and that last phrase of 'felt a little like death'...pure poetry
    February 19th, 2008 at 02:02am
  • C V.D P

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    I.... There's no words to describe. None at all. Excpet for: Amazing, wonerderful, beautiful. That about sums it up.

    It's not over, right?
    January 20th, 2008 at 07:40pm
  • TorturedWings

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    this story is beautiful....
    I love it so much and I think you're an amazing writer!
    January 16th, 2008 at 08:37pm
  • EeVie !

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    wooow so i just finished it and it's the most amazing thing ever!! i think this IS my favorite story of all time.. just omg wow
    i absolutly love ur writing skills and the plot of this story. it was just soooo amazing!!! whenever i wasn't reading this story i was ususally thinking about it, thats how much i love it :) !!!!!!

    this is truely an amazing and breathtaking story
    January 4th, 2008 at 10:59am
  • EeVie !

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    im only on chapter 14 but i LOVE this story!!!
    it seems different than others (in a very good way) and i love it
    January 2nd, 2008 at 12:48am
  • M.P.A.

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    I am up to chapter five, didn't read it yet, gonna start soon, though.

    i just wanna give a big FUCK YOU to bert--whats fucking wrong with him?! Gerard's a bit fucked up too--i mean, he wasnt exactly being nice in the car. and i feel soo bad for frank. i mean when you first started talking about him, what he looked like, my stomach turned, espicially at the eye part. anything involving eyes creep me out.

    this is one of my favorite stories on here!!!!
    im kinda speechless, yet i have so much to say, its weird. i think imma explode. O.O

    ill read a bit more later!!
    xoxo
    December 24th, 2007 at 11:55pm
  • carcinogenic.

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    :cheese: :arms:
    December 21st, 2007 at 04:12am
  • bellaxomuerte

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    Fucking hell :cheese:

    I just read all 34 chapters in one sitting and I couldn't tear my eyes away for one second because it was that fucking good. And now I'm cursing, but I only curse when I'm like...zomg...I'm gonna like go do something crazy now. :crazy:

    You broke my heart several times while reading this effin' masterpiece and mended it several times, too. In Love

    It's been a loooooong time since a fanfiction has made me feel this way, and I wish I could come across more stories like this. But then again, not. Because when I come across something beautiful like this, I appreciate it a whole lot more. In Love

    This is just simply amazing. I wish I could come up with a whole bunch of other adjectives to describe it. But I'm a pretty simple person. I loved it. God. Now I love you. I better stop before I stop scaring myself and you. :shock:

    :arms:
    December 20th, 2007 at 11:30am
  • carcinogenic.

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    &#9829;
    December 12th, 2007 at 03:50am
  • My Chemical Romance.

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    . . .:shock:

    Wahey, I finally read it!
    And I don't think I've felt quite that much emotion from a story in ages- if ever.

    I really really want to leave a super-long heavy comment about what I thought of each and every chapter. But, I think my useless words would be an insult to how insanely perfect it really is.

    I don't think you need me to tell you how fantastic you are,
    but I shall do it anyway.

    YOU'RE FANTASTIC. YOU'RE FANTASTIC. YOU'RE FANTASTIC. YOU'RE FANTASTIC.
    YOU'RE FANTASTIC. YOU'RE FANTASTIC. YOU'RE FANTASTIC. YOU'RE FANTASTIC.

    And you are a complete
    utter
    genius.

    :]]] ly.
    December 12th, 2007 at 12:19am
  • bilo.

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    Ohmygod.
    Ohmygodohmygodohmygod.

    Amazing.
    Just wow.
    Wish I could write something more coherent, but my brain is still in the story.
    December 2nd, 2007 at 10:28am
  • king.

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    I read this story... no ARTFORM over a span of three days.

    Not because I'm a terribly slow reader, but because after reading several chapters at a time, it almost became too much for me to handle. All of the beauty, emotion, poetry and repetition piles together onto one screen, making a weight so... godly
    I probably sound like a rambling mad woman, but all of this is a compliment. This story is beyond amazing. It's stunning and just... it leaves me speechless.

    Sorry for the crap review. I promise to properly review whenever you get the chance to post a new chapter. Until then, take care and don't take anybody's shit.

    [Oh, and, by the way - you're a fucking genius.]
    November 26th, 2007 at 08:49am
  • carcinogenic.

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    In Love
    November 26th, 2007 at 07:37am
  • Miss Stroup

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    Omyfuckinggod.

    This story is beautiful, in one of those beautifully morbid ways. I mean, you write in the way that I wish I could write.

    Holy shit.
    I'm speechless now.
    November 25th, 2007 at 07:38am
  • Unleash The Cupcakes

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    Ahh!!
    I FINALLY got to sit and read the whole chapter! =]]
    And, without a doubt, I fuckin' loved it and you deffinatly, deffinatly need to update soon! =]]
    November 20th, 2007 at 08:23am
  • Mindfreak.

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    Woah,
    I really don't know what to say.
    Your heart up there pretty much sums up what I want to say about it.
    amazing,
    simply amazing.
    &#9829;
    November 9th, 2007 at 10:52am
  • carcinogenic.

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    That about sums it up. :]
    November 9th, 2007 at 03:38am