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  • ultraviolet;

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    how do you consider that bad?
    damn i love this story. its rivaling tastes like someone stole my wallet as my favourite.
    (Smiley)
    i just feel so damn SORRY for them. its emotive : ( (not that thats a bad thing : ) )
    November 3rd, 2007 at 12:29am
  • ripley

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    I don't know how you can say that was bad.

    It was stunning.

    Thank you for updating this amazing story!
    November 2nd, 2007 at 12:50pm
  • baysway

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    I have missed this story! It is painful to read leaving my stomach in knots. Your writing is amazing. You truly paint the picture.
    November 2nd, 2007 at 09:13am
  • nichole

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    It's not bad in any way at all.

    It's fucking beautiful, that's what it is. Everything about it is so disturbing, violent, tragic, and beautiful.
    November 2nd, 2007 at 08:30am
  • change of time.

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    God.

    I dunno what to say. I'm so speechless.

    And you write this story so beautifully in such a... Sick, horrible, tragic way.

    S'just so. Amazing. Fucking amazing.

    It wasn't bad at all.
    November 2nd, 2007 at 07:27am
  • alannaXasphyxia

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    -is sad-
    WHY WHY WHY does he have to be blind?
    :(

    More soon.
    I love this storyyy.
    November 2nd, 2007 at 06:33am
  • poetic tragedy

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    :cheese:

    This chapter was not bad.
    I mean, if this is bad, my stories are atrocious.
    :]

    God, theres just so much emotion, and gah.
    You leave me speechless every time I read something of yours.

    ♥
    November 2nd, 2007 at 06:19am
  • GenRage

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    I love your mind and your ideas for this story :]
    November 2nd, 2007 at 06:02am
  • Fake your own death

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    You're doing this on purpose aren't you? You are doing this to torture me, huh? HUH! Every chapter gets more and more pooooohhlu. See there isn't even a fucking word in the entire dictionary to explain this story. None. Nothing. *makes another ugggghhhhoooogh sound* God. I like Don't know what do to. I want to reach into that story and just huggly Frankie. Poor Frankie. *pets imaginary Frankie*
    November 2nd, 2007 at 05:39am
  • xX SadoMasochist Xx

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    Oh. My. God.

    Speechless, yet again.

    You're such an amaing fucking writer...
    November 2nd, 2007 at 05:38am
  • hormones.

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    I've been reading this for a while, but I've never commented on it
    But I have to say this story is seriously so fucking mind blowing
    Just every aspect of it, is just pure amazement.
    This is seriously some of the best writing I've read in a while...
    Just thought I should let you know
    and I can't wait for the next update, even if the end is near.
    <3
    November 2nd, 2007 at 05:28am
  • letsxgoxfrankiexho

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    that was horrible
    every part is so horrible
    (not the writing)
    November 2nd, 2007 at 05:15am
  • Mindfreak.

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    -gasps from lack of oxygen-

    I'm going to die.
    I'm going through withdrawal symptoms.

    =O

    you. must. update.
    i. must. read. good. writing.

    -dies-

    . . . hehe.

    (:
    October 27th, 2007 at 11:37am
  • carcinogenic.

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    In Love Thank you so much.
    October 25th, 2007 at 07:06am
  • mon_visage

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    *new reader/fan/stalker*
    I just read all of this
    It was amazing.
    Your descriptions are flawless
    'Long, dark gashes covered his eyelids and sockets, almost obscured by the lurid semi-viscous crimson liquid pouring down his cheeks in two black ruby rivers.'
    'His eye sockets were rose-petal red with the same partially-congealed blood that was smeared on his cheeks and palms, food-coloring Red 17 Lake red, darker than cherry licorice and candy-cane stripes; vicious horizontal and vertical slashes decorating his upper and lower lids and the top curve of his high cheekbones.'
    You have an amazing talent and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.
    You have become one of my favourite writers
    In short, I pretty much love you In Love
    *scoots off to read rest of your stories*
    Shifty
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    This whole story is beyond amazing
    I can't find words that would even come close to describe how incredible this story really is.

    In Love
    October 24th, 2007 at 11:03pm
  • carcinogenic.

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    THANK YOU!
    P.S. Poetic Tragedy... I love your signature. :]]
    October 20th, 2007 at 03:29am
  • poetic tragedy

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    OH MY GOD.

    That chapter brought tears to my eyes.
    Really, there were so many emotions running through it.
    I thought Frankie was gonna jump.

    “What would you miss most?” he whimpered hoarsely, trembling against me. “If you went b-blind?”

    The tears were building so fast in my throat that I couldn’t answer him.


    ^ and those last lines made my heart flutter.

    This whole story is beyond amazing
    I can't find words that would even come close to describe how incredible this story really is.

    In Love
    October 15th, 2007 at 02:06am
  • xX SadoMasochist Xx

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    Fuck.

    That almost made me cry.

    Holy shit. Poor Frankie....
    October 15th, 2007 at 12:51am
  • Mindfreak.

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    He's actually blind? Like, for good?
    Ahh, no, Frankie!
    -cries-

    Amazing update.
    I actually thought it was the end and that he was going to jump.
    -sigh-
    Glad he didn't.

    update as soon as you can!
    =)
    October 14th, 2007 at 12:56pm
  • Zaraza

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    ...and that was a shitty place to stop.

    olive.
    October 14th, 2007 at 09:30am