I Lost My Fear Of Falling - Comments

i really wanna read this story/ miss it... is it ever gonna come back?? :(

Really good story :P

Very good story....very interesting..Update soon

P.S. Thank you for all the comments

You know, the format :]
By as for the rest of the story, I like the concept and the beginning...
SARCASM - haha. She uses Sarcasm. I likey that.

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I got confused, by as so far, I like the plot and the intro.
LMAO. Sarcasm. Niceeee

Lark? she cant have tht name!!!! im larkin!

good story me likes!!

yup i will!! as soon as GeeandBobrockmysocks gives me her account info!! lol.

thanks for reading it and ya i know i need to fix it. but im not good at that stuff so sometime (dont know when yet) my friend VaMpIrEfRaNkLuVr will post it for me

I agree with the above, and the lack of speech marks makes it rather hard to understand, especially (sp?) in Chapter 1 with the 'yes i can no you can't yes no yes no' thing going on. Other than that the actual content of the story is great, and I am awaiting Chapter 3 eagerly. :)

It's true sweetie, the story is good. I would really like to read more. But without the formatting makes it really difficult to read. It's kinda like a waste of a really good story.

How can I put this nicely?
Use a word processor.
Write like a professional.
Learn how to format.

;)

UPDATE BIOTCH UPDATE!!

NOOOO NOT A CLIFFY!! : : :

o well... it was good!! : : : : :

i'll wright more later dont know when tho :D