Shit, I've just read it and let me say you've made my day with this. Is it actually possible, a story entitled like a Simple Plan CD featuring Gerard Way, drugs, sex, alcohol, English and Sipi being the writer behind this thingy?
My dearie I am off to sleep because I am fucking tired but before I do, I am feeling the urge to tell you what your mistakes were. As you will know because it's been quite awhile now since we first talked, thing I do not bring up to the conversation, thing that I think is okay. So I liked the chapter. It's sort of prologue-ish dull but that's what a prologue's supposed to be. Sometimes boring but always needed to start getting involved into the plot line.
You do it Spanish, you do it in English and fuck, if you could speak Chinese I well know that you'd do it too. Your verbal tenses are all messed up, honey I know you can do much better, find a pretty beta with enough knowledge to correct those few mistakes and you should have no problem with this fic thing :)
And. Keep on writting, you do it quite well while I am utterly unable of doing something other than Spanish shit. Good Spanish shit though... Okay I think I'm done here with my lack of modesty.
So, pretty pretty thing I am making you a request. I don't tell you how to do it. But since you've stolen their title I want Simple to be featured in one of the chapters. Or a few of them if you get my hint... Maybe you could start thinking about David actually having an active sexual life and fucking Gerard. Or getting fucked. I don't know.
And basically that's it, I'm done here and I swear I did not intend to be that much of a pain in the ass, but I just can't resist it. I love to be mean to you my beloved wife.
Shit, I've just read it and let me say you've made my day with this. Is it actually possible, a story entitled like a Simple Plan CD featuring Gerard Way, drugs, sex, alcohol, English and Sipi being the writer behind this thingy?
My dearie I am off to sleep because I am fucking tired but before I do, I am feeling the urge to tell you what your mistakes were. As you will know because it's been quite awhile now since we first talked, thing I do not bring up to the conversation, thing that I think is okay. So I liked the chapter. It's sort of prologue-ish dull but that's what a prologue's supposed to be. Sometimes boring but always needed to start getting involved into the plot line.
You do it Spanish, you do it in English and fuck, if you could speak Chinese I well know that you'd do it too. Your verbal tenses are all messed up, honey
And. Keep on writting, you do it quite well while I am utterly unable of doing something other than Spanish shit. Good Spanish shit though... Okay I think I'm done here with my lack of modesty.
So, pretty pretty thing I am making you a request. I don't tell you how to do it. But since you've stolen their title I want Simple to be featured in one of the chapters. Or a few of them if you get my hint... Maybe you could start thinking about David actually having an active sexual life and fucking Gerard. Or getting fucked. I don't know.
And basically that's it, I'm done here and I swear I did not intend to be that much of a pain in the ass, but I just can't resist it. I love to be mean to you my beloved wife.
xxo Mar