To Hear The Soft Voice - Comments

wow I loved this
the setting was so unexpected but really fresh and beautiful
I love the simplicity and that you didn't make it go on too long
Great work :)

wow I loved this
the setting was so unexpected but really fresh and beautiful
I love the simplicity and that you didn't make it go on too long
Great work :)

This is very different. I assume the roman numerals are representing days? I'm not sure. But this is very unique. I thought it was beautifully written. Throughout the whole thing I was like "What the fuck is happening?" And then I finished it and everything clicked. I love stories like this.

I also really liked how at the end they weren't in love. I mean I guess Gerard was in love with Frank, but I liked how Frank wasn' t in love with Gerard. That may be the ideal ending and it works with some stories, but for this it wouldn't really work At least inmy opinion. I really love the fact that Frank said "I can try." It's so realistic how you did that.

This was just beautiful... lovely.

wow O__O That was amazing! :D

That was absolutely amazing, and I do have to say, all your stories are magnificent, and you have to be one of my favortie authors on Mibba.
=]

Loves it!

I absoulutly loved it! Sorry, i dont have any fancy font or signature to make your comment pretty, but i wanted to let you know its written Beautifully

WOO HOO! FIRST COMMENT! I absolutely love the story! Do you have any more stories? If so, lemme know because I would love to read them!