Close to the Heart - Comments

ok i just started reading this story and realized you haen't updated in FOREVER. and i'm mad cause now i'm hooked and you don't have any intentiopns of updating. so please!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE U P D A T E! :)

EPIC FAIL when it comes to updating this.

I SERIOUSLY LOVE THIS BUT.....
i got offended by this - “You call this warm? Is there something wrong with British people?” Shane asked.

“For your information I was raised in California not London,”

why do americans think ALL british people are Londoners. I'm from Ronkswood, near birmingham. theres more to britain that london. Britain = Ireland, Wales, England and Scotland.

I love the unhappiness. :)

this is a delicious story(:

i absolutely adorrrrrrrre it.

update....... pretty please?

good update.
more soon?

update really soon

That filler was delicious. Your updates always make me hungry. I blame you if I weigh 300 pounds or something.

this is awesome. =)
PLEASE update soon

lmfao.
"the pizza man" XD
i love it.

THANKYOUUU!!!!

shane is suchhhh a cutieee.
youu made a good characterrr(:

BETTER not be a month.
you should have seen my face when i saw that you actually updated this, i practically jumped out of my seat =)
amaazing.

i love this :D
like, a lot :D

aaaaaammmmmmmaaaazzzzziiiiiingggggggggggg... this story is truly incredible!!:]

i have the BIGGESTTT cravingg for doughnuts right now. like you dont even know. lol

MOREEE SOOON PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ!

Reading this made me feel like i had eaten loads and i got reallt thirsty lol

but i loved it!
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Haha,loved it
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i love this :]]]

I got a tummy ache just from reading that.

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This story is awesome, so funny!!